Reviews for Birth of the ultimate shinobi
ShadowImageComics chapter 1 . 3/29
Okay, I am hooked and sad that there is not another chapter. I can not wait.
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 1 . 1/4
Awesome start of the story I hope you continue
Xenter chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
This got to be the most reviewed chapter on the site :O 500 review for one chapter? Holy fuck :P
Dark Fox God Of The Fist chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Shove this canon loving shit up your ass, cock-sucking Kishimoto lover.
ThunderFist Slayer chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
AWESOME! Please Continue
Umi no Suiro chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
the first one was great hope you update this
samuraiofslide chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
great chap hope to read more soon
Uzu no Oni chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I Love it! Update soon pl0x ;)
Kaiju Rinnegan chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Do you take requests or ideas for who is in the harem?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
What happened to the other chapters?

They are here and then they disappear the next time I look.

Why/How did this happen?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Why did you delete the other chapters why hide them 'Cries anime tears'(TT)
albert chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
you need to fix your stroy it only shows the first chapter that you can read
Nickraptor730 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Hope Kushina isn't a hypocrite in this because she has her own kids try to kill him then ask for forgiveness that seems a little to stupid for him to accept that apology
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Hope you do Kushina differently, instead of finding out he is alive and still does not even try to get him until several years later made her a horrible person really. Plus herm mother thinking that Naruto was a demon, should of had her think the same of both Mito and Kushina.

That way it would be easier for Naruto to accept her.
Uzu's-Archangel chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
if your using toto as the term for little brother, in english characters it would be otouto
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