Reviews for He Doesn't Love Her
Guest chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
I hate Red John, stupid lonly serial killer, I hate Patrick Jane because hi is just stupid for not being nice til Lisbon
I love Teresa Lisbon
mentalistrealove chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
can you PLEAAAAAAAAASE continue with this? its really good the way you keep resolving a conflict but then creating a new one...its keeping me holding on and waiting for are amazing! :)
Bruna Fights Back chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
I'm cliff hanging here! I cannot wait, I need the next ASAP
mentalistfan123 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
NOOOO LISBONNNNNN. WAHHH. NO YOU CAN'T END IT THERE. YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE. Now I'm just throwing these out there, but you can have Jane follow her, go to her house, have LISBON leave for six months, ANYTHING. JUST DON'T END IT D:

It was a great fic! :D You're a really good writer haha.

Keep writing! :D
Elizabeth chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
This screems a second chapter.

Of course there will be one.

It really doesn't feel finished.
Aania71 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I feel likr crying, really it's so emotional. I love it ;)
Jennifer chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
this is amazing story and you protrayed the characters so well ! i love the end scene where Lisbon goes away in the elevator and Jane catched up after her it's like reversed situation, please write more soon ;)
SteeleSimz chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Nice start. I hope you continued this story. Thanks for sharing.
Flowerfaires chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Wow, this is really, really good! Once I started reading I just couldn't stop! For your first Mentalist fanfiction you really know how to write the characters and express vulnerability to them. I hope you write another chapter :)