|Reviews for The Revelation of Emrys|
| Gurgelgurgel chapter 21 . 10/22/2015
I reaaaaaallly like this story... you got me in wonderful turmoil of emotion. buh-ut couldnt you Change morganas life for elyas like it happend with nimueh or something like that... its just ... i dont think Gwen deserves this kind of loss..pout...
well what is done is done
Nervertheless GREAT FIC Im ithcing to read the sequels ;P
| Reviewer chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
Tried again for this chapter but by the end of the first few lines I quit. It doesn't matter if the story is good or not - the errors are just too obvious and amateur to ignore. If you want this fic to be more popular, and to allow yourself to grow as an author, I suggest you fix this story up or hire someone else to.
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
Please get a beta, or proofread your chapters. This story looks interesting, but I could not continue if the rest of this fic is as error riddled as chapter one.
| Linorien chapter 21 . 4/30/2014
This was very fun to read. For all the crack fiction I have read of yours I was pleasantly surprised that this one seemed very realistic in their reactions. You did a good job of showing each of their emotions as well. If you are particularly bored some night, you may want to consider doing a simple revision on this story though. There were many misspelled words that sometimes pulled me out of the story. Nothing a simple spell can't cure. But great job. I am on to the next one.
| Helmius chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
I've really enjoyed reading this story. It's pretty good. There are a few typos here and there, probably just from fingers slipping, that get a little distracting. It might be worth looking through and fixing those up. It would make the story that much better.
| secretstar42 chapter 21 . 8/15/2013
That was great!
| luluelm chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
so goood so good so good!
seriously though get some kind of spell-check.
| luluelm chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
read one of your one-shots and now i'm hooked. i like that you're true to the characters.
| mercury chapter 21 . 1/27/2013
| Frakking Toasters chapter 21 . 1/22/2013
That was excellent! I read it all in one go - I literally couldn't put it down & was so happy I could rush through each chapter & not have to wait for updates! Loved it. xo
| Loki'd in 221b chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
So, I really like the story so far, but you keep spelling Gwaine's name differently :/
I wish you had just stuck to one instead of switching constantly between Gawain, Gwaine and Gwain..
| mad 4 the doctor chapter 21 . 1/1/2013
I realy. Enjoyed. What you. Did. To. Morgana, maybe. You. Could have. Melin and the knightts. Scrrying her as she's. In. a rant. Or. Something. Bbbut. Justt. Aa sugestion. Sorry about. The. Spelling and. The dots Im doing. This. On an I padd the space. Bar. Keeps. Adddingggg. A. Dot. Andd. Extra letttttters. Keep. Adding. On
| LozzaBlueBell x chapter 21 . 11/21/2012
THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY! I READ IT ALL NONE-STOP... almost... I read up to chapter 19 last night (from chapter 1) in 1 day... and the last 3 just now (i was too tired yesterday... lol) But, that was one of the BEST stories I have ever read, seriously! Thank you so much, and I hope you write another Merlin fic some day,
Lozza xxxxxxxxxxxx :D
| SSRavenRules chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Wow, I have read a though this and it i amazing. I dont know why other people have said it is hard to read. I can read it just fine. It is amazing :)
| Starkid191 chapter 18 . 8/21/2012
*Inside Merlin's head*
" Merlin, Merlin"
"Wake up Merlin"
"Merlin, wake up"
"What is it you guys?"
"We found the way to candy mountain, Merlin!"
"Candy Mountain, Merlin, Candy Mountain!"
...I wish. I'd rather he woke up and saved the day though. Again.