|Reviews for Deep into the Grave|
| Julia chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
I'm sorry, but this is literally one of the most grammatically incorrect writings I have ever read.
| opposum3 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
is that picture...from hetalia?
| Thrice the Double U chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
An interesting concept, but I would've enjoyed it more if some of the sentences had correct grammar. "Tybalt lived in an arid city across the mountain of Verona with his parent who are alcoholic while he was a child." "Scars full with his body..." That should be "...with his parent who /was/ an alcoholic..." Parent is singular, meaning the verb must be singular. Also, in that same sentence, it should be "when," not "while." The latter quote should be something like "Scarred all over..." or "Full with scars, his body..." Grammar is a key factor in writing and while the plot may be super awesome, leaving out factors like grammar could completely ruin a good thing. Now, this story was good, don't get me wrong. It's just that there's room for improvement.