Reviews for A Drunken State Of Mind
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
I can just imagine some guard on the docks hearing them doing the dirty and trying to keep a straight face. xD
A chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
great fic. thank for posting
Violet26 chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Nice story. I liked the plot. The characters were a bit off here and there, Miguel was excitable occasionally in the movie but I didn't think he seemed ignorant or naive, there were times he seemed to feign it for his partner's sake, but in your story he sounded a bit childish at times. Tulio sounded a little too parental, but seemed more in-character. It was still a nice read. I liked the ending a lot. I have to say though, I think it's good they had some alcohol because it would have gotten pretty chilly under the docks, especially at night. :)
Gabe Mason chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I loved it! I just loved IT! It was so great... so awesome!
InsaneAndHappyAboutIt chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
very nicely done! XD I thought it as so cute though i would have LOVED to smack Tulio a few times for being so blind...XD Great work!
SilentMelodies13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Adorable ...great fic guys
Beizanten chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
The storyline is very great, the character is pretty Ic only I don't think Miguel is that childih and seem to be very smart in the movie. The sex is hot
nmegz1996 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
amazing! really wish there was more ;
PMK nut chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Oh. My. God. This was awesome! Make more! x'D

PMKnut xx
PhoenixOaks chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Aw that was great! I can totally see it happening that way.