Reviews for A Scream
Tytoalba1 chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
i loved it,
great work on that one, i always wanted to see how four would actually react to the whole touching this and you did it super well. keep up the good work!
Carole Benett chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
I think it was great! Good job :)
Noxaura Cille chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
Aw, such a cute story! I had actually forgotten about Tris telling Tobias how she was groped.

Anyway, thanks for sharing!

Divergentfangirl chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
ll Kairi ll chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Aww this was a cute oneshot. And I feel like it fits perfectly with the series. Great job!

tris blood chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
just to let u no tris blood is actuaaly my real name ok back to the point lol this is really good please write me u inspie me im not sucking up shit wat can I say write more
22tobias chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Amazing! Please updae this! I can't wait to read more!
Sourwollf chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Amazing, you really did a great job :)
Isabella chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Again such an amazing set of literature! Your writing mezmerizes me. The way you can so easly mold into your choice of charecters is so gifted and talented! I am 12 years of age and planning on taking a writing myself, and you inspire me.

Thank you!
Dauntlessgirl57 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
This is really good, I loved it :)
babyvfan chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Okay, that was just wow. And cute
liberal4peace chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Loved it!
7angstyrabbits chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
I've seen quite a couple of Four PoV fics, and this I think ranks pretty high amongst them.
It was really well written and major points for not having an incredibly OoC Four.
I liked it a lot; please write more like this!
BookieCookie23 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
it was amazing! you described everything so well! and it sounded exactly like veronica would have written about four! you did not change him but at the same time showed the affection he harbours for her! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
person chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Loved it ! 4 is my favorite charecter from divergent and ive always wanted to know what his point of view is like. THANKS!
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