Reviews for Surprise, suprise
zee2000 chapter 11 . 4/23
oh my god, this entire story was basically a fangasm for me, i couldn't stop squealing and wiggling around, this is amazing!
cecilia.anim chapter 11 . 11/2/2014
I loved this series. First thin i read it in ocktober 2013 and still love it now. Amazing work
franlynn chapter 11 . 1/24/2014
Hi I really love the fact that u made hiei a good person in this story and I loved and thought it was cute how u made him the godfather and how everyone new that the baby would be well protected with that in place just cause of his past and how strong he is now
clinical prof chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
may i just correct
1. how did you know the age of gestation without having menses
2. where are the signs and symptoms aside from n/v
3. emesis gravida should be in the bed
4. the utz is good. but where is ur fht
5. again in ur utz, where is the fetal presentation
6. in dr which is my specialty you should also check the dilation first before contractions. where is the cord. before you said he is in pink color, what is the baby's very first appearance
7. since he is a preterm birth, did he suffer from fetal respiratory distresss, good thing did not go through an incubator
8. since her water got broke, is she an gynecoid or platypelloid
9. is she an incompetent cervical os.
10. mechanism of fetus?
11. with subjectivity can you defend this in a case study?
kojairah chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
this story is nice...
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Daichilover chapter 11 . 8/27/2013
This is the cutest thing I have ever read! Hiei is perfectly in character. I love to think that a baby could soften him up. :) I especiakky loved that last chapter. Soooo freakin' ADORABLE! :D
Encantada the Maiden chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
love your emesis gravida
KurenoxArisaxx chapter 11 . 7/10/2013
Holy crap, I thought I was gonna die reading that last chapter. So much fluffiness...so many feels. Wonderful fic. I loved it very much XD
KurenoxArisaxx chapter 9 . 7/10/2013
OMG, I LOVE how you write Hiei. You capture his personality quite well and even give him those little rare sweet moments he sometimes has in the anime. You should write more YYH fics :)
KurenoxArisaxx chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
I really love this fic. You get the characters personalities across so well. I can actually picture this happening in the anime from the way you write it. Awesome job :)
KurenoxArisaxx chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
What an adorable first chapter. I'm so glad I finally found a YYH fic for these two that didn't seem sadistic. Awesome fic you have here. Thanks for posting it ;)
Encantada the Maiden chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
i like this story of yours,,,are you somehow a nurse or a doctor cuz you know how to diagnose a pregnant client?and 34 weeks is not enough to deliver a baby outside uterus and in fact Raizen would be a preterm birth at masyadong mabilis ang rupture ng membranes niya, ung contraction niya dapat may intervals din, saka ung first trimester niya mabilis? Pero anyway I love this story!
Anime Chick344034 chapter 11 . 6/7/2013
You should make a story of Raizen in his teenage years and accidently going to the Demon World.
Anime Chick344034 chapter 9 . 6/7/2013
Lol. Best chapter of all. Hiei showing some love and Yusuke stating Ive seen it all. TOO FUNNY. I love how you showed a emotional side to hiei. He rarely shows it only to Yukina or Mukuro, and Kurama
Guest chapter 9 . 6/7/2013
LOL Best of all the chapters. Hiei showing some love and Yusuke saying Now I've seen everything. FUNNY
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