|Reviews for Cain and Abel|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/28
Please continue ,your story is very interesting.I cant wait to know what Naoya do next to Abel Thank You
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
| Haruka Kuze chapter 2 . 3/27/2014
Thanks sooooo much for the fic! I love it! Please continue soon! With more fluffy romance :'3
| Et-chan chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
I hope for more of cute
| loveless23 chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Hope ya could continue
| Sunny Ah chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Ooh, nice story! I like it. Keep up the good work! (:
| messiah chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
This story is cute! Keep it up ヮ
I'm waiting for next
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
Y u no continue? ( )
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
This needs to be continued. It has a great story and great vocabulary.
| Yukai yami chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Finally got time to read chapter two, lol. I must say, MC is soo cute! I love the way you made her! I can't wait to see more! I honestly don't mind fics that pace themselves slowly, it makes them feel more real, because it doesn't zoom by things like, example, a manga or an anime would. I really hope you continue this. I'm totally alerting this!
| ZeroDragonSP chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
You single handily made me want to go and hug a SMT character...that has never happened before. You made the MC seem so completely innocent and adorable. Keep up the good work, this idea it far too good to give up.
| Yukai Yami chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Niiice :) Look cool so far! And I gotta say: LOVE the idea :) a fem!MC and Naoya fanfic is SUPER original. Looking forward to the next chapter and more!
| Green Sprout chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
Man. I like this so far. I really love the little moments between Abel/Cain as well as the fact that Cain remembers everything and Abel does in her own little way, without realizing it.
Still keep this up; don't drop it!
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Oh I LOVE the idea of fem!MC, especially if we get to see how Naoya's thoughts would change from how he sees the normal MC. Please continue this!
| Green Sprout chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Wow what a good start. Here's hoping for overlord ending or At-low's ending!