Reviews for Dark Paradise
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Oh awesome! I'm so glad that you expanded on this one. It was really good as a drabble, but this extension is simply fantastic. The angst and turmoil and emotion you were able to get out of it is incredible. It all unfolded really well and it was really great seeing them both trying to reconcile what had been said and done, trying to make it all right again. But both thinking that they were the ones that had screwed everything up beyond help.

But man, I don't think I've ever felt more for Sam than I did at this moment. You captured everything so perfectly. wow.
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Big brothers shouldn't have to worry about their monster siblings


Powerful emotional Sam.

Love Dean came looking for Sam flinches away but Dean is gentle and there for Sam.

Good story!
Thank you!
Shannanigans chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
So sad, so sweet. Well done!
agent iz hyper chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Awwwww! *melts* Read this with 'Far Away' by Nickelback on. Cue teariness and lotsa 'aw'ing. x) Love this! I mean, I got why Dean reacted like that, but still! He shouldn't have, cuz they're brothers and all that, and this was awesome. :)
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Great tag to that episode. I was SO pissed at Dean when he said that to Sam. Horrible words.

Love this.
rozzy07 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
A much needed and welcome add on to Metamorphosis - exposing the hurt for Sam that is gnawing away at him internally like an emotional cancer. Great writing, giving Dean a voice seldom heard in the show offering up his conditional love for his brother. Love them boys being brothers.
T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Wow! you've successfully packed quite an emotional punch in such a short piece! nicely done. :D Seasons 4/5 were so heartbreaking and there really was no resolution, at least nothing spoken or worked out; the boys simply drifted back together and in a way, I feel robbed of the needed angsty moment in the series. But then, that would have deprived us of writing and reading it. ;)

Thank you for the little bit.