|Reviews for A Nightmare's Jewel|
| Wish upon a NOVA chapter 9 . 8/24
Oh man, this story is so good!
I love the relationship you have between Nightmare and the Prince! It really gives this story a life of its own in a sea of Meta Knight origin stories. I cannot wait to see if Meta will be turned against Nightmare due to his experiences in the GSA or if he secretly will always be a spy of sourts for Nightmare.
I hope this story isn't forgotten and updates at some point!
| Vampire Tails chapter 9 . 6/6
Yes! this is amazing as always! seeing as I'd already left a huge review on the previous chapter, I'm just gonna cut it short here.
Sorry, by the way, for not getting to this when it came out. I dunno why I didn't get it. But please update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| dappershockwave chapter 9 . 12/27/2016
its great keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/24/2016
Amazing story! It's very interesting and well-written. I read it awhile back, and thought it was incredible, so I came back to see if you had updated and you did. I was so happy! Keep up the good work! :)
Also, Meta Knight's eyes are actually white. His mask has a yellow visor in it. Not sure if he has his mask on in that last chapter, but it sounds like he doesn't. I can't tell. Oh well. That doesn't stop this story from being awesome!
| sonicxjones chapter 9 . 6/23/2016
| Piplup chapter 9 . 5/22/2016
Woohoo! Another update! I remember finding this fic a year ago and being all "HECK YEAH METAKNIGHTMARE THEORY!" I'm really happy you updated it again! Can't wait for more!
| Lanny-Sama chapter 9 . 5/18/2016
I am super happy :D
I really really love this story, and I love Meta Knight as well! I am very thankful that you wrote and posted this!
I loved the moment with our Prince looking at his cape-wings, and his obvious fear and discomfort. It is very fun to realise that he still acts like a little child even if he is strong enough to kill a fair amount of demon beasts on his own if he wanted to .
I wonder how he will eat if he continues to ignore food and look for blood :O
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 11/10/2015
I really didn't like the idea of NME having a soft side, or baby Meta's personality (i really wished he had some extent of his silent, mysterious personality) but the rest of it is really, really good. Keep writin'!
| sonicxjones chapter 8 . 3/23/2015
Darn I finished all the chapters.
| Vampire Tails chapter 8 . 2/14/2014
OH MY GOSH! XDD
Le update! XD
Well, in all seriousness, I had received an email from a subscription that you had updated, and, honestly, I squealed in shock! happy shock, mind you! XD
I didn't read it right away, but I did a few days after but way before today! XD
I have no idea why I didn't review immediately, but here I am now! That's good, isn't it? But, what's even better is that I have something to review because you updated! XD
First off, this chapter is very good! I felt for Meta Knight - well, not that I wouldn't - in the cold with painful wounds.. I felt like I was there with him, and not just because this Chicago winter is particularly brutal this year; but because you described it and his emotions so beautifully that I could imagine it in my head as I read.
I was so glad that the mother discovered him in the cold and took him in, and that the Prince was having a moral dilemma about whether to feed on her and her son before and possibly during the time he was cared for. Just goes to show that the Prince of Demon Beasts has morals, even though Nightmare most likely disapproves - and, speaking of Nightmare, his character in the previous chapters really shines a different light on him, to show that he's (...He's...?) not the cruel, callous monster the anime makes him out to be.
I was sad and shocked when the mother suffered an ill fate; but I understood, and hope that next chapter you really compound MK's remorse towards this - just something I'd like to see and that would make sense.
Now, how's the Prince gonna get outta this? Well, that's something for the next chapter, which I will be hinging on now that you've updated! YAY!
And I'm still shocked! 3
Vampire Tails out! *zooms away*
| greenone15 chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
YAY! Your not dead. I was wondering when this story will come up again because I have been reading, following and favoriting a lot of Meta Knight based fanfics ( even wrote one myself that had unfortunately went through 2 plot changes until I was satisfied with Meta Knight). Anyway, I was just about to go and read this story and I was like: well what do ya know? It's back from the grave of writer's block where most stories go to die, your one of the lucky ones. Plus, I had to refresh my memory a bit on the plot line and I also think you should stick with the spoiler because people should know why Meta Knight keeps his mask on other than to hid his Kirby-like face. It could be something like: Its the only memory he has of him or of he takes the mask off he feels like it will go against his honor (or something like that).XD
P.S Glad your back and I loved this chapter even though someone had to die and Meta Knight was
| StressOfWriting chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
Awesome chapter! I'm very happy that this fanfiction isn't dead. Your fanfiction is actually one of the first fanfictions I have read, so your story is really special to me :)
I really like how this chapter went. The two new OCs are so sweet. I also like how you described the Prince's pain, cold, and determination. The description is really anticipating. Now I'm really excited for more, thanks to the ending's cliffhanger.
(SPOILER) Oh, and about your Author's Note, I like the idea of Galahand giving his mask to Meta Knight. In fact, I suspected that to happen in your story when I have first read it.
Well, looking forward for more! It's great to see that this fanfiction is back!
| Flamefox2 chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
Please do continue this story!
Also, for the Galahand-Meta Knight mask dilemma, I would like for Galahand to have given MK his mask. That way Meta Knight would have a reason to keep the mask and have a memory that is always carried along with him... and also because I like Galahand a bunch. XD
| Olivia T.Echidna chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
...Meta Meta Meta..wow..Im shocked..Nice chapter by the way!It had an unexpected twist!
| BrightDarkness-2013 chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
Well that was interesting and yeah I don't mind waiting. I have a good memory so I still remember the whole story. Give it a few years without any reminders and then I'll have some problems.