|Reviews for Helium Pancakes|
| Optimistic chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
This was wonderfully done. The description was spot on. I felt that in the episode so much emotion could have been conveyed and you definatly did it here.
Anyway nicely done! Hope to see more from you.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is a good story there was just one problem that I have: Helium is non-flammable. Other than that one detail it was good.