Reviews for A Lifetime Together
MeldonElraenhie chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Thanks for sharing this piece of art :) I wish I could go on with the was a very good one. Thanks!
s chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Amazing. I love these kind of fics, and is looking forward for more!
Blunablue chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
hey Ritsuka-chan,
is this really your first fic ever? Well then you do a pretty good job It's written fluently, and you give much character insights... interesting, that kenshin doesn't stirr when Tomoe touches his cheek - like back in the time in kyoto... has he calmed so much yet or does he trust her already? How long are they now at Otsu? At the beginning Kenshin wonders about his thoughts of killing her... but then it seems that they live together for a long time now... i find it a little bit confusing, maybe you should add some time references. Well, but that's the only thing I have to criticise ;) just keep writing on! bye, bluna