Reviews for Wanderer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, this story is really annoying. Grats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tony Stark, merchant-of-death, should be saved by him? At this point in time, anyone with a working brain would assume he'd save more lives by killing Tony Stark than saving him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione has suspected since before graduation, built this bracelet for the past five years, and in all that time didn't think to even give Harry an idea so that he could prepare? I think I'd hate her quite a bit. It's just another example of people talking away his choices from him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() verily fitting, Harry falcon was a proud bird. Respect to his disdainful looks and snobbish attitude lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smooth beginning, i already lament the fact that there's only six chapters TT_TT |
![]() ![]() Three things: One (for Harry). Not helping your friend when she specifically asks you to, is a completely dick move. F**k you, Harry. F**k you. You don't deserve to have Pepper in your life. Two (for the author). Giving Harry a fake guilt trip to force him to do it, is moronic. Being a passive pussy is no way to live your life. Your MC is unlikable and no one can connect with him. Three (also for the author). How the hell did Harry just suddenly have all the money (and ability) needed to open a coffee shop on a new world that he knows he might leave in an hour or a week? Why would an antisocial introvert that hates personal interactions, open a F**KING coffee shop that has him interacting with hundreds of people a day? That's right. HE WOULDN'T! This story makes no sense. |
![]() ![]() Ugh, yes, this is excellent. |
![]() ![]() I don't get why didn't he drink the water. Not like a falcon drinks much anyway. harry here, is like harry in many other fanficiton. He says he doesn't care about others, and likes to stay away but still puts everyone else before his own health. I hate that |
![]() ![]() I really don't understand why harry went to save stark. I mean, yeah, he himself said that pepper guilted him into it but still. There are children sold to slavery daily, forced prostitution, drugs, child soldiers etc etc... And harry decided to save the billionaire genius playboy to do his good deed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have really enjoyed this story. How do I find out who has taken it over? Or could you post a link in an A\N for us to continue reading the series? Thanks alot for all the good stories and I am sorry that you have lost your motivation and love for this creative art. But we have enjoyed and appreciated your hard work on these endeavors, and hope you find something that can fulfill your time and bring you happiness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully Harry's in the future of the world he is the God father of Loki and Thor. It would be hilarious as h#[[ if it is they'll both be like GOD FATHER/HARRY WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? WHY DIDN'T YOU RETURN TO ASGAURD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, but poor Harry. I've been through something similar, but mines entirely emotional. But that last rip, probably broke his heart as much as the one with James. If not more. Awesome story keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() It's sad that such an amazing writer such as yourself has lost interest. Your story was really good. I don't believe anyone can do it justice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this is one weak-ass Harry. I mean, he's a 600-year-old Wizard. And the best he can do is turn into a Falcon and stay in the rafters like a retard. A 16-year-old Hermione would've done far better. A simple Imperio on their leader is all it would've taken to free Tony. This fic is good but it's also extremely disappointing. |