Reviews for Disillusionment |
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![]() ![]() ![]() No words. No freaking words. But I like this. I approve of broken slightly insane Merlin and desperate Arthur. Merlin angst fics are the best. |
![]() ![]() This was a heartbreaking story but it was soooo good! I have to confess, I'd LOVE for you to write a little bit of a sequel where Merlin finally comes back to Camelot...even if it's thirty years later. (But hopefully before Mordred shoves a blade through Arthur's chest...) |
![]() ![]() Wow there was some wonderful emotional whump in this story. A bit of a shock, but intriguing that you didn't end it with a perfect 'happy' ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm cheering for George! He gets to have a piece of Merlin's usual part, a piece of heroic action. It's almost as if he really is stepping into Merlin's shoes, going above and beyond the call of duty, once Merlin sheds his role as manservant. When I read this a long time ago, I had no idea who George was and could not appreciate what was going on but now I can! Loving how you gave George some time to shine as more than Merlin's comedic replacement. |
![]() ![]() I'm loving this story! I'll certainly be reading more tomorrow. |
![]() ![]() This story is brilliant! I've been busy reading one chapter after another so I haven't reviewed yet. I've actually been crying reading this chapter. I'd just started reading the next chapter when I realized I should take a moment to go back and review this one. It's excellent, I'll definitely be reading more! (I had to change this as I was originally calling this chapter 6, before realizing that the listing included the prologue then each chapter *face palm*). |
![]() ![]() ![]() "What can I say? MEN..." Hah! Communication really isn't one of their strong suits, is it? (I'm speaking generally, of course. There are certainly exceptions.) And I laugh every time Arthur refers to Lucan as a ‘thief,’ because he ‘stole’ Merlin away from him. It's just too cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You’re not a native English speaker – that explains it. Interestingly, your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are still much better than those of the average writer on this site – and these are people who have been speaking English their whole lives. Kind of ironic, when you think about it. And a little bit sad. Did Elyan and Percival really just leave Gwaine in the alley, passed out drunk, in the middle of an enemy invasion? I know they didn't have much of a choice, but still... With friends like that... :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far, though I notice you seem to have a bit of trouble with word confusion - built instead of build, disregarded instead of discarded, mussed/mused, grant/grand, caused/cost, etc, etc. Just thought I'd point it out, for general writing improvement and whatnot. No worries, though - it happens rarely enough that it doesn't detract from the story or cause more than a moment's confusion. Now, back to the story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() -When the axe's glint shone above the defeated King's neck, even the storm clouds up above seemed to hold their breath, waiting to hear the unmistakable sound of the falling blade cutting through flesh and bone.- -End of chapter.- Me: O_O You: 'Tell me, would you like me to continue?' Me: 'Surely you must be joking.' You: 'I'm not joking.' Me: '...' You: 'And don't call me Shirley.' XD |
![]() ![]() Hope you decide to write a sequel but don't like the fact that magic users have to register etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! amazg story! I even cried a little at the end haha! the way you wrote it and the reactions were all very realistc and your characters all amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Shit. Like, I can't. I just. That's all i could think. i was viciously biting my lip and trying not to make noise these past few chapters. It HURT. God, did it hurt. But it was So. Dang. Perfect. I just. and seriously. SERIOUSLY. I kid you not I shit my pants at that last line. I just. Wow. Okay. Now I'm going to go cry over the perfect tragedy of this story and share it with my friends so we can all cry together. Jesus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() But that sound won't come. WILL IT, NOW? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read it for the second time, still awesome. :) |