Reviews for The First Attempt
DolbyDigital chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
I really want to know why Thomas' name came up just before he was about to jump. Did he remember something from before the maze? I would love to see a sequel of this.
i-dont-believe-in-mountains chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
This gave me feels but I love it!
ChizuruSama chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I enjoyed this :) ... but why did he mention Thomas? I don't think Thomas was in the Glade when Newt tried to kill himself .
pleaseforgetthisaccount chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Wow, depressing but well written
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Ahh I love newt thank u for writing about him
-Rosie ;)
life1428 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This was.. Just woah. Great insight into his mind