|Reviews for John Porter Drabble|
| Semaphore chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Perfect description of the moment when he lets go (I have no more cards to play). That scene, like your drabble, was just a few seconds, but sometimes it doesn't need more to describe a character... For me it would even work without the last line, because we know from the previous lines how important Lexie is to him.
| Semaphore chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
#1 works for me :-). I don't get all the TV references (Danger Mouse? never heard of it), but it is funny nonetheless. So John does not think Dariush a stuck-up, posh b*st*rd anymore? :-)
#2 is a bit more difficult for me. I don't get the final exchange between J. and D., but Stonebridge gets a honourable mention. He might grow up to be useful yet! :-) And why is Scott still around? Isn't his gap year over by now? *evil grin*