Reviews for Ohana
Guest chapter 39 . 9/17/2013
excellent
Guest chapter 39 . 9/17/2013
Wow, he forgave her. That's something that they could try on the Show. Loved this whole Story. Thank you.
MaliaRose chapter 38 . 9/1/2013
That was sad but I understand Steve needing space from Doris. He made the right call.
bubzchoc chapter 38 . 8/30/2013
great chapter
francis2 chapter 38 . 8/30/2013
Sniff. This is soooo good.
francis2 chapter 37 . 8/13/2013
I can't believe Steve shot Wo Fat and Danny was okay with it.
bubzchoc chapter 37 . 8/11/2013
great chapter :)
bubzchoc chapter 36 . 8/5/2013
Cant wait for more
Guest chapter 36 . 7/23/2013
Seriously? You end there? I want to know what happens! Please continue!
MaliaRose chapter 35 . 7/1/2013
Interesting chapter. Full of suspense. I like what you're doing with Doris.
francis2 chapter 35 . 6/30/2013
Uh oh! This was either the bravest or dumbest or most traitorous thing Doris ever did, depending on the outcome and why WoFat would even want to talk.
Runner043 chapter 34 . 6/12/2013
Okay, I'm all caught up on your story... need more chapters to read! (please)
francis2 chapter 34 . 6/9/2013
I really like this. Doris needs to understand what her actions did to Steve. Chin is a great mother hen, and Danny is like a wolf protecting its puppy.
Craftygirl11 chapter 34 . 6/9/2013
This should be good. I can't wait to find out what happens. Update soon.
MaliaRose chapter 34 . 6/9/2013
The picture of Steve and Danny asleep on that bed. Can I get one? They do look adorable.
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