Reviews for The Innocent One
foREVerTheMusicKid chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
Holy crap! :D I can't wait to read more!
foREVerTheMusicKid chapter 6 . 6/19/2013
I'm so glad you updated :D I love it!
16BlackRose chapter 5 . 9/10/2012
more! please...
kcrb0202 chapter 5 . 8/24/2012
foREVerTheMusicKid chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
*claps* A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Moooore woman!
SayMyGoodbye chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Awesome, bro. Just…awesome. Please update ;D
foREVerTheMusicKid chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Seekerfinnan chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
Like the way you introduced your characters very well done
Keskron chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
Monica seems like a very interesting character, and I find it interesting on how you explained how Crystal Lake's water seems to have these supernatural properties. Very cool!
foREVerTheMusicKid chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
Keskron chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Although I do like the concept of the story, it felt a bit fast paced for me. I think it would've been a lot more understandable if you took more time to explain the characters and their relationships in detail. I was able to follow it, but it would've been more helpful this way. But I do like your uniqueness in this story and I hope to see more from you in the future.
LightningVacancy chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Very unique story you got here. The characters are interesting and I hope they grow to be well-developed if you choose to continue this story. And to end with a cliff hanger! That means you must keep writing! Looking forward to the next installment!
MadameSkyfire chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Really intrigued by the storyline so far.

Looking forward to the next installment :)