|Reviews for Bathtime|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22
The story was short(and frankly not that good), but still I can see your hard work in it and I hope you'll write better ones next time (with less typos too)
| ethan bomgard chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
it may have been short but i believed that it was pretty good. I mean, i liked it.
| Skyestorm chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Lol short, sweet, and funny. Pretty good writing overall as well :)
| plavoko12 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
a good story. i like youre way of description(i need to improve my own) and i wish you the best of luck in your future fics, please if possible sir codemeister, review my newest piece that will be out in two days (same subject).who knows maybe we can collaborate!
| wolf girl811 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
ok that was cute )