Reviews for Unforeseen |
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Guest chapter 13 . 10/7/2021 It is do damn well written and well thought. It could seriously be a good Romance anime ! |
Mirage chapter 28 . 10/2/2021 Even when she was rather childish ...and mopped over an crush for over two years ...she finally did right thing and did give someone a chance she did ignore bevor ...and found real love and good friend and partner who respects her and who cares ..and his whole pack . Also she decided to stop mopping about her bad grades in school and get of her behind to go back to school and make something for her future ...so really a vet or vet assistant? - But I hope the rest wolves too ...they are long living they can hold riches in places like dragon here and there and sell them every now and then under other names and other person...they also could set you Kai in the right places over time. ..like law , judges , clinic and midwifes, nurses ,also where one can make there legal papers ...school ... with how they can can change there look why not build bigger business with changing owner every 10-30years ..(hair colour changing is easy ...like some grey here or there over the years. ...and makeup artist can make one look nearly everything ...or fake scars or dimples and such I still think they can have more fun than only construction business. .. there are other things ...cook , mechanic doc, psychiatrist, cop...janitor breeder..d. ).like to a right hand or a child or nephew or nice or such ...and the could it take over "after learning everything" Still hope there will be once a second part ...like about there first pup...or litter of pup ...or how her school and work did go...if he made a chain of business ...did buy the forest and the waterfall, nature preserve for wolve and deer with there own forest ranger or such. ..they evem could build a natural holiday home for there kind behind the waterfall with solar power and farming and plumping and natural waste clearing and all that Or nothing at all of this and something fully different- |
Mirage chapter 17 . 10/1/2021 After reading this again ..I think you made a mistake .. you did say stupid grandma underwear ...to her boxers ...but where this not borrowed boxers and shirt from him? And really grandma underwear is comfy ...so whe not wear it . ... I mean how long would you really see the underwear ..and boxwrs are alright ...lots of girl wear female boxers ...and as long as it is not the old style undrwear one with long legs and this flap at the behind ...all is alright...only when you show of or strip ...r spwcial day or such...I think you would want the more special ones - |
sara.pricee.1 chapter 28 . 9/30/2020 I loved it so much! Great job! |
Kromatic chapter 20 . 7/13/2020 Fk you saved me I thought I hated modern au but this makes sense this scene is so SMUTY FKFIFJXNSIIDYDGSDJB SAVE ME MASTER |
Guest chapter 28 . 1/4/2020 Interesting story and i like the pairing and how they got closer with time- ...even when they always seem to forget protection from the sound of it Great that kagome goes back to school and college to try to finish to learn some thing and seems to think she know what she likes to work...is it being a vet? ... - Izu did come back and asked more or less for forgiveness and to get accepted back into the pack and Ayame was kicked out nicely after getting her nose handled to her by kagome And kagome decided to live for real with the pack But one thing I found strange , where is sesshomaru ? Je is a dog youkai and powerful and how old his father was he should be still around... will he show up one day? Shippou maybe too? Also kouga and the pack thinks in the wring way with work... there could build a coffee shop with sweets with hot guys ...then change them out every 5 or so years and change there look hair colour eye with contacts some gray here and there in hair of the boss of the coffee shop...they would make big big money nobody would ask to much questions . Also why not learn some medical school and such . then they could take care of health problems mates and hanyou, because they have there own "high end clinic only for some people" construction sites firms also make great money...as they are strong and fask they will get the work well done and get more jobs, like at day normal human and some you Kai work there and night shift there work only you kai more fast and safe. Or bodyguard they would be great as they could hear and sawmill and see trouble way more sooner than normal human and could protect the person they need to way better and make big money too with a own protection and security firm. They really don't need to work bad paying jobs... only change put here worker every now and then or change the look. ;) They are better than low pay work. And they should slowly buy more and more land around the waterfalls and there old cave , so they can go there more often to be free witrout worry that people xpuld come there. What ever will happen it would be interesting, hope you maybe write second part |
YukiQuin chapter 28 . 12/13/2019 T.T i so wanted more of this story! |
Kedrane chapter 28 . 9/21/2019 Absolutely an awesome story |
KitsuneOdin chapter 28 . 6/20/2019 I love this story soo much! It's the best one I've read with Kagome/Kouga as the pairing and it had so many scenes that kept me smiling at the overwhelming cuteness of it all! |
animecutylover chapter 15 . 6/2/2019 When I saw the chapter title, I thought it was gonna be bad for them. But, this is okay. I guess my paranoia just ran with me. |
aliciabear22 chapter 28 . 3/21/2019 Is it wrong of me to say I kinda wish you would write a sequel? Don't get me wrong, I love how this ended. This story is perfect! But I want to know what happens after, you know? Does Kagome ever get use to the teasing? Does Izu finally accept her as pack? When does Kagome become Alpha Female? Does Ayame have more of a fit to throw? Does Sota ever get to meet the pack? Where the heck is Shippo? So many questions! But I will deal with it as is. And I will read it again and again! |
rans0medheart chapter 1 . 10/29/2018 Lovely story! Perhaps a short sequel? Please! :D |
MidnightReader1 chapter 28 . 10/1/2018 Wow fantastic story, absolutely loved this story from start to finish. Can’t wait to check out out your other stories :) |
NanneroftheWE chapter 28 . 9/4/2018 A-Freaking-dorable! I loved this! Thanks so much for sharing your story! :) |
MiaFaythe chapter 28 . 7/4/2018 Just... wow... greatly appreciate this. you have no idea. I hope you continue with a sequel. I love the dynamic. |