Reviews for Secrets to Keep
Spirit09 chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
It seems like a good story so far but you mixed up a major plot point, Goblet of Fire is the fourth book and fourth year so the main character group (malfoy, potter, and I am asuming your OC is the same age as malfoy) would be fourteen not fifteen, book/year five is Order of the Pheonix. Just thought I should point that out, sorry if it upsets you or anything, I wouldn't correct you if I didn't know for sure (Harry Potter books are spread out on my bed in order as I am typing this) Ciao ;o)
I Am Coolio chapter 27 . 11/28/2012
This is amazing! Girl (slash boy, whatever gender you are), you keep doing what you're doing and you will have a very bright future. :)
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 27 . 11/25/2012
lovely please keep going!
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 26 . 11/22/2012
good go on!
Dancing-Souls chapter 25 . 11/11/2012
Dancing-Souls chapter 24 . 11/11/2012
Buttercup.Cheesecake chapter 25 . 10/28/2012
I thought Melinda already had a baby? Is she pregnant with another?
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 25 . 10/27/2012
good go on! i was kinda confuse there for a second maybe put a timeline at the beginning of the chapter!
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 24 . 10/6/2012
very sweet please keep going!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Is this on hiatus?
Dancing-Souls chapter 23 . 9/22/2012
Awe good chapter I have wanted to know about why she has a caretaker. Also I wonder why they died and who those men were?
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 23 . 8/31/2012
really good please keep going!
Guest chapter 22 . 8/21/2012
I like how it's developing, it's nice to see so much background story. Update soon!
Dancing-Souls chapter 22 . 8/17/2012
Awe! I like this chapter it was nice to see his perspective on their past!
Dancing-Souls chapter 21 . 8/17/2012
Hmm I doubt it is nothing...
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