|Reviews for Haywire|
| draken14142 chapter 3 . 1/4
ohhh man! please, next chapter, I beg of u X3
I really love this story
| GuardianWitchDemiGhost chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
GWDG:HUGE PLOT TWIST! XD OMG poor Danneh; first he is now a 'true' halfa, now he found out he is adopted!? You're just torturing him! P I'm loving it though. _ Please update soon! I will end with my goodbyes,Ta.
| Ani-DP-TT-PJ-H-Ben10 Fan chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
I was so not expecting them to say that Danny was adopted... Huh. Please update soon! I love this story! I think it's amazing and you should continue it!
| Weirdo chapter 3 . 6/8/2013
Well there a shocker
| HalfafanD chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
You know you can actually replace the chapter instead of adding one that says 'replace' or whatever. Great plot, keep updating
| Rubellite Game chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
Keep it Going!
| Rubellite Game chapter 3 . 2/17/2013
I was just reading your Realized #3 and I would like to tell you in case you don't allready know. There is a fic on this site that is exactly what you were talking about. It's called Checkmate by pearl84, just thought you ought to know.
| The Magnetic Witch chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
Say whaaaa- ... *slow claps* You, dearest writer, are a genius with plot twist. Now scadaddle to a computer and type! MUSH!
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
nooooooooooooo write more now
| Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
I like this story.
| shadowxdragon chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
;D Clockwork always makes cookies. Wait, Danny's adopted! Finally! I have found another story in which he has adopted! Who are his real parents? (it's not Vlad, is it?) Are the bloodstream nanobots still an important factor? Please update soon!
| shadowxdragon chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Great job! HOW did you make everything rhyme so perfectly?
| DB-KT chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Whoa! Adopted? By who!?
| popie92 chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
| yuki100o chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Ya sorry but chapter four and three are still a no no.