This is sooo beautiful and heart-wrenching, fortunately with a happy ending. I LOVE your Draco and Hermione, they are exactly the way I imagine they will be. Thank you for writing this, this is my favorite Dramione short story that I will reread from time to time.

waSJdfhgblsdjfzxc n this broke my heart omg

Poor Draco. !

Make A SEQUEL!PLEASE!I WANT one SOOOOO BAAAD!

Wonderful story... I felt my heart break in tiny little pieces for all the shit poor Draco went through. You're an amazing writer ;)

Wow. This is brilliant. You write so well, and I think you really wrote Draco perfectly.
It was heartbreakingly beautiful to read his interactions with the hallucinatory hermione. It actually moved me to tears.

...Best Story I've read yet.

The summary made me think "mhn, Halloween Thing, whatever." It is most definitely better than that, which was a pleasant surprise. Good Job!

Love this

You should have ended with him telling her 'I love you'. Good, but that one detail would've made it perfect. And it isn't crap, it's a journey to self realization for Draco with Hermione to help her. I would've focused a bit more on the getting to know myself thing but well.. Keep on writing, I'd love to read more :)

Draco's love for Hermione was really touching. Thank you for writing :)

I loved this great job :)!

You are a wonderfully fantastic writer and I tear up every time I read this piece. It's so beautiful and heart-wrenching at the same time. I'm just amazed with you. Continue writing though. You have an obvious talent for it. :)

I'm crying! That was so emotionally intense! Beautiful! Just beautiful!

This is my favourite piece out of all your stuff. There's just something about it that makes me want to cry...you've written Draco so fucking well...x

talking to hallucinations...whoah, he was really messed up! this piece was very emotional, i loved every bit!