|Reviews for Rewritten|
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/5
Okay just found another thing you got wrong a hirashin seal never disappears minato proves that with obito
| Kurama uzamaki chapter 5 . 5/4
Good story so far but peoples mistrust of the uchiha clan in the village didn’t come until after the kyuubi attack before that only the higher ups like danzo and maybe tobirama were wary of them
| YaoiHellian chapter 18 . 4/29
Very fast paced which was nice but it felt like somethings were missing in places, though the flashbacks helped in some regard to that. I liked how everything came together at the end, loved Sasuke being Itachi's son. Kinda hoped that Gaara could have been saved from himself or just mentioned (aside from being declared dead in flashbacks), but that's just my own bias with Gaara. Anyways, great story, thank you for writing and posting.
| iiNeo chapter 18 . 4/24
Are you stupid? Nagato was given the rinnegan by Madara. He didn't awaken it, it was always there.
| Write Your Wrongs chapter 18 . 4/15
Thank you for writing this masterpiece. Perhaps the best Time Travel Naruto fanfic I’ve read.
| Neroscurse chapter 18 . 4/15
Sweet story mate! Thanks for posting as I've enjoyed reading it.
| timisnotmyname chapter 18 . 4/13
Great story, throughly enjoyed it. Thanks for the great time!
| thomquiri chapter 9 . 4/8
OMG mission "make a little Itachi within the month to break the marriage contract with Fugaku" O_o
| Lory chapter 9 . 3/29
The fanfic is good, but there are some pretty nonsensical things, like he trusts Danzo, but doesn't trust Orochimaru, there's also the fact that Tobi exists even though Obito hasn't even "died" yet, and Kakashi's father is alive when he committed suicide when kakashi was five anyway a lot of things don't add up
| leoamaatodos chapter 18 . 3/8
| Gilgamesh50 chapter 12 . 3/6
What if it is safe to transfer kurama to naruto from kushina belcz naruto already has his chakra from the future
So that during the birth of current naruto
There is no chance of taking controll
| Ataruss chapter 18 . 2/28
I just finished your story and wanted to thank you die an enjoyable time.
Also regarding those "Mary Sue" comments...I cant see where those would be coming from. I personally like what you did with Hikari. So...thanks again I quess, Bye!
| vamsikrishnayadagani777 chapter 18 . 2/24
I liked it
| Pinumbit chapter 15 . 2/21
"How many fathers could say that their son is their best friend?" I cried at this. Naruto finding himself being held in his father's arms is something I think Naruto deserves, but Kishimoto decided that Minato would lose his arms at the end of the war arc, what the actual heck lol
| Caniblmolstr chapter 18 . 2/6
I was fully expecting a twelve monkeys type ending to this... Naruto dies after fathering Itachi. Mikoto remarries and has Sasuke.
Itachi guards his dad as an infant. Telling him stories of his mother so that they do get together later on. Naruto goes back in time marries Mikoto but dies before he could kill Tobi... The loop is complete without breaking the paradox. Hence proving rime travel is useless