Reviews for Rewritten
Guest chapter 16 . 8/1
Yeah, I give up, starting to get really angry. It's probably not your fault, just too many fucking Uchiha's in your story. The only good pink-eye is a dead pink-eye after all! #NidaimeFTW
Guest chapter 11 . 8/1
Even though I love this story, the way you drag your feet... Let's just say that authors like you are the reason I learnt how to speed-read. Granted, I still foam at the mouth when I'm annoyed by the slowness but at least it's over in a couple of minutes.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/10
Look I do not reread many stories; LoTR and HP. But I have reread this fanfic about six times and I enjoy it EVERY time. Thank you.
JustDusty chapter 7 . 6/16
Did you even watch naruto at all or are you just randomizing the timeline? there are so many inconsistencies in your story that i can't keep up with them anymore. and why is mc going around revealing everything about the future to the most untrustworthy people he can find? i mean come on couldn't you just give him a name other than Naruto
Luthanora chapter 18 . 4/28
why did you change your writting style for the last, longest, and shoring up story chapter? It makes no sense, all it does it throw you for a loop with a jaring ending, rather than a neat and tidy one
Dumby95 chapter 17 . 4/28
Good chapter, good fic
Dumby95 chapter 11 . 4/28
gud chapter
Dumby95 chapter 8 . 4/28
good chappter
Dumby95 chapter 6 . 4/27
good chapter
Dumby95 chapter 5 . 4/27
Good chapterr
Dumby95 chapter 1 . 4/27
interesting start
DarkestLight234 chapter 17 . 4/24
Umm, you do know that tobi is obito right? And Madara is to old to do anything. So who the fuck is this guy?
DarkestLight234 chapter 11 . 4/24
I wanted to wait till I was done with the story... but its tooo good. Solid? This story is AMAZING!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/1
If I could Kudos this, I would click without any resignations, I love kids epilogues! I his story was kick-ass hope you keep up the good work
NobodyOwens5 chapter 18 . 3/20
I absolutely loved everything up until chapter 17, the battle there felt a bit weak but your writing clearly wasn't focused around writing battles but instead excellent character development and interactions. And though I was sad to see there wasn't more interaction between Naruto and Mikoto in this chapter I can understand why.

overall this was a really solid fix even if I wish it were longer. Mikoto is a very good choice in Waifu so I'll give this a solid 8.5-9/10
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