Reviews for Rewritten
Cthul chapter 17 . 5/29
Yeah did you know… being fucking handicapped and a cripple is totally hot and exotic
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 6 . 2/24
Good story but I have big problems with the flashback sections. Only gripe is that Naruto shouldn't be consistently losing to Obito since this Naruto has KCM for years. Not to mention Obito is alone (no Madara, zetsu, Akatsuki, etc) and is somehow beating back the entirety of the 4 nations while he likely only has 1 rinnegan if at all (you don't mention it but I assume he does), and Naruto alone should be able to high dif him let alone with all the backup he has. Other than that major inconsistency I'm really enjoying the present stuff
Joestar94 chapter 18 . 2/21
This was a fic I had been holding out for months and when I finally got to reading it, my only regret is that i hadnt read it sooner. This has to be among the best Naruto time-travel fics I've read, especially those that involve Naruto going to a timeline before his. A similar story to this would be Consequences but that tried to follow the canon much more than this (dunno if you read it but it involves a major character death). Anyway, the only other fics I've read involving time travel are Mystery of the whirlpool , a sort of one-shot from Tsunade's perspective (You can guess the pairings from that), and another one where its another NaruTsu but has Naruto with the Rinnegan and his best friend is Sakumo Hatake, and they are like a tag team and famous in the second war.
Anyway, great fic! And I get the frustration about Mary Sue. Didnt think Hikari was one that much. And that Harry Potter comment was so true. JK made him flawed to such a way that she decided to dumb him down and underpower him so that Hermione (and Ron to an extent; I mean how does one learn a language (parseltongue) that can't be deciphered by others who aren't parselmouths) got more spotlight (enough for many cuck harry smut fanfics to emerge. Frigging sadists.)
HalfBlood Prince chapter 18 . 2/10
Honestly, the N.U x M.U relationship was too rushed, in addition to the inclusion of Mei as a slut or Naruto's previous relationships constantly extinguished the flame of romance...

6/10
bibink729 chapter 6 . 1/27
good
Guest chapter 18 . 12/27/2023
I good short fanfic one of better ones that I've read
Pvtcheeks chapter 12 . 12/12/2023
I have a distinct feeling you were scared to say “sex” when you wrote this XDDD my guys its not a dorty word, plus, sex is one of the most beautiful and amazing things a human can experince outside of having children lol. Dont be afraid to say it, well write it(you know what I mean), because its not some word we should be shameful about lolz

It is one of the most amazing things we can do to show interest, passion, love, a while slue of things. GG to naruto though, can’t believe my mans got the mizukage to have the hots for him XDDD
Pvtcheeks chapter 11 . 12/12/2023
OKAY SO THEY DIDNT?! I’M SO CONFUSEDDDDD
Pvtcheeks chapter 11 . 12/12/2023
Okay so wait, did they have intercourse or not? I’m cool either way, jur would like to be unconfused about what happened. Shut up and kiss me naruto.

Fucking skip to the next morning saying she wasnt experienced in any sexual nature and talks about her giggling ans shit… like did it happen…or not? Its weird when I read stuff like this because sex is a completey natural thing to share how much you love your partner with, so saying yes they did instead of(and I’m serious I can’t tell if they did or not have sex) saying a bunch of other stuff related to the would be far better.
bibink729 chapter 2 . 12/2/2023
nnnn
ll Lucian ll chapter 18 . 10/15/2023
Satisfying story that leaves an ache in heart when it ends
Amazing work. The epilogue had tonnes of new characters that builds up hype and shows how well the konoha flourished decades after Madara's defeat.
If there is anything i could actually critique at, it would be of the limited time you took to reveal tobi as madara and his subsequent defeat, no issues with fight scene but i expected a lot more plot involved prior to battle and even retreat, but its actually no big of an issue

Anotger suggestion i could give would be to make a spin off of this series , continuing with these new characters and involving sappy moments as a lite fic. All in all 9.5/10 fic
The beginn of Red Dawn chapter 18 . 7/30/2023
a really great story
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 3 . 7/26/2023
Why wouldn’t Hiruzen know about Hiraishin? Tobirama was his sensei and used it alot.
bombomb602 chapter 18 . 6/27/2023
One of the best time travel fics I've had the immense pleasure of reading
Boophaven chapter 18 . 6/23/2023
Honestly a great read for a fairly short story. Time skips felt really good which is rare.
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