Reviews for Rewritten
thomquiri chapter 9 . 4/8/2022
OMG mission "make a little Itachi within the month to break the marriage contract with Fugaku" O_o
Lory chapter 9 . 3/29/2022
The fanfic is good, but there are some pretty nonsensical things, like he trusts Danzo, but doesn't trust Orochimaru, there's also the fact that Tobi exists even though Obito hasn't even "died" yet, and Kakashi's father is alive when he committed suicide when kakashi was five anyway a lot of things don't add up
leoamaatodos chapter 18 . 3/8/2022
beautiful 3
Gilgamesh50 chapter 12 . 3/6/2022
What if it is safe to transfer kurama to naruto from kushina belcz naruto already has his chakra from the future
So that during the birth of current naruto
There is no chance of taking controll
Ataruss chapter 18 . 2/28/2022
I just finished your story and wanted to thank you die an enjoyable time.
Also regarding those "Mary Sue" comments...I cant see where those would be coming from. I personally like what you did with Hikari. So...thanks again I quess, Bye!
vamsikrishnayadagani777 chapter 18 . 2/24/2022
I liked it
Pinumbit chapter 15 . 2/21/2022
"How many fathers could say that their son is their best friend?" I cried at this. Naruto finding himself being held in his father's arms is something I think Naruto deserves, but Kishimoto decided that Minato would lose his arms at the end of the war arc, what the actual heck lol
Caniblmolstr chapter 18 . 2/6/2022
I was fully expecting a twelve monkeys type ending to this... Naruto dies after fathering Itachi. Mikoto remarries and has Sasuke.
Itachi guards his dad as an infant. Telling him stories of his mother so that they do get together later on. Naruto goes back in time marries Mikoto but dies before he could kill Tobi... The loop is complete without breaking the paradox. Hence proving rime travel is useless
Lilthug chapter 18 . 1/31/2022
Finished and I loved this story. Great job!
TheShob chapter 16 . 1/2/2022
I thought Naruto was near immortal. Plus, can't he teleport outside via hirashin?
TheShob chapter 3 . 1/2/2022
Love this fic
GrimStormWind chapter 18 . 12/31/2021
Great story
Pinumbit chapter 1 . 12/27/2021
Loved this enough to finish reading in one sitting lol.
yes4 chapter 13 . 12/27/2021
and u know that tobi is obito and that rin is still alive
yes4 chapter 12 . 12/27/2021
u fucked this up by making Naruto sign that shitty contract
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