This story is really good. Is it really dead?

I really like this story it was really getting good I hate that it's dead

WHY IS THIS DEAD

They are too fucking cute and awkward

Okay but what color are her panties?

I really like the characters. Nice story. Will be awaiting the next chapter.

Let me get this out - Kirsty is a damn bitch who doesn't deserve Yamcha, let alone Gohan. She really overestimates herself.

Great work. Read it all in one go. Nice idea to work as a collective - would some members of the collective be keen to pick up where it stopped and run with it?

Really enjoyed reading this story. Shame it seems abandoned. Especially with such a following. Hope someone changes their mind and decides this is worth finishing. I certainly feel it is. Such a shame to leave great stories untold.

Oh my god Piccolo and his PMS was just the funniest thing I’ve heard in a while! Someone please continue this fic!

This is a well written story, thank you for sharing it..

Loving the story. Time to let the secret out to Videl. Let's see what happens next.

When she was being rude he should have been like “Excuse you? Hating me for something that hasn’t happened? Is that the sort of person you are?”

Great story. Looking forward to the next part!

Loved this! It was great!