Reviews for Plus One
The King in White chapter 14 . 5/12/2016
L-lewd
The King in White chapter 10 . 5/12/2016
Oh thank fuck. Yamcha to the rescue. I really don't want to get into a ruinous love triangle _;
hersiver123 chapter 3 . 3/19/2016
Man, this has to have some of the best characterisations of gohan and videl I have ever seen. They are perfectly on point. Well done and thanks for sharing your story with us.
Just another fan chapter 15 . 3/14/2016
Nnnnnooooo! Only 15 chapters so far and now it doesn't feel like I can live without the rest of this story! I will always love u- especially u chapter 14. Oh my;);) MORE PLEASE!
NavyNinjaHo chapter 15 . 3/12/2016
T-T the story got abandoned at such a good timing...
The story was so good though...
2014...looks like I need to read more fanfics to get this one off my mind...
Jt chapter 15 . 2/26/2016
Epic story, I started reading a few days ago, and fell in love with this story all over again, I'm a fan of both of you individually, and your joint work is sufficiently impressive.
StygianSloth chapter 15 . 2/6/2016
D: why do good stories always seem to end right at the good part for me. ;u;
Engel2092 chapter 15 . 2/5/2016
I didn't even realize how long it's been... almost 2 years since and update? It feels like it's nearing it's end, where's the ending?
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 12 . 1/25/2016
If showing off your magic powers didn't work, clearly you weren't using enough of them.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 7 . 1/24/2016
"Are you Videl?"

Her heart jumped. She looked up to find herself staring into bored blue eyes of a rather good-looking blonde lady in a comfortable pair of jeans and blouse.

"Uh…yes?"

"18," said the blonde.

I lol'd. I lol'd so much at the mental image of 18 doing this for Gohan.

See kids? This is why you don't lie.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 1/24/2016
With two fingers to his forehead, his Dad moved them out of the mayhem of Gold City and saw them home.

You know...Goku said the aliens taught him that "technique" while he was getting his ship fixed...why did he never teach anyone else how to teleport, or if he can't teach it, bring his friends to that planet...

As to the fire: Le Gasp! I bet that bridge place was trying to assassinate him!

Also, I found it hilarious that Chi Chi would even worry about a fire being dangerous to someone who tanks energy blasts. Silly Chi Chi.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 4 . 1/24/2016
An image of a tall bulky woman, the exact replica of Nappa with red spiky hair tossing a Ki blast suddenly came to mind. Aw come on, just because she's a fighter doesn't mean she's built like an oversized Saiyan.

Ghost Nappa is in your story, screwing it up!
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 3 . 1/24/2016
That...that would explain the chatting. I'm pretty much the Gohan of my group of friends, so that sounds like something they would try to do to me.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 2 . 1/24/2016
Aaaand of course it devolves into a Goku Vs fight. Good job Gohan.
BringItAllBack chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
Can you please guys give us an update about this story? We haven't heard from you in a while and it would be such a shame not to finish stories like this. Same goes to many of your fanfictions.
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