Oh honey…I can’t wait to read Chelsea’s response…lol she’s such a bitch.

She’s right… he should have to work for it! Lol

Let’s see how long she’ll make him earn it.

That break-up was awesome…they were honest and up front with each other. There was no need to yell and say mean things to one another.

You did a great job!

Well, Charlie took the news really good, considering. I like the way he’s standing by his daughter.

I’m so interested to see how Heidi is going to respond to Edward being her father… and how Edward will respond to her when he’s introduced to her as her father for the first time.

Also… how will Edward’s family react.

It was quite obvious Edward wanted Bella to stop her line of work. But because of his line of work, who he was, there was no way they could have a real relationship.

I think it’s kinda obvious Edward has some type of feelings for Bella inviting her to a family home, somewhere so personal.

Well, there went my theory of Bella being pregnant. Lol But I so loved Edward’s reaction to James, and him wanting to be with Bella for the weekend, privately ;)

I think Bella is pregnant and hasn’t realized it yet, but I could be wrong.

Thank for an AMAZING story! I wish there was the outtake and the Epilogue. Hopefully someday. TAKE CARE XO

Hope you come back with those 2 chapters

I enjoyed your story. I wish you were still writing. Hope you find your way back.

Really great story. Epilogue? Outtake? I’m just dying for more.

This was such an engaging fic. Thank you.

i read this entire thing in two days! this is my first time reading this fic and oh my god! you have done such a great job of it