Reviews for Heavy Losses
abazaba chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Though I would argue against some of your points, it was a good read.

Lagoon boy shouldn't have flown off the handle just because he was called a rookie by Conner, who has more experience and pretty much a co-captain, because he really is a rookie.
I AM NOT A CLONE chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I dont think it was Superboy who told Megan to stop the missiles it was Nightwing

I really think you have him being too harsh on himself here,lagoon boy and megan have been shoving there relationship in his face i suspect maliciously on lagoon boys part. I allso dont think he was too harsh on Megan (she did try to mind rape him) after all, he could have told people what she's being doing but instead kept it a secret to protect her

She owe's him a huge apology and i dont want them together untill she realizes what she's doing is wrong

You write him like an abuse victim who thinks everything is there fault

this is not intended as a flame i just think you are really harsh on superboy here after everything Megan has done to him
Dextra2 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012