i was really enjoying the story before you just up and threw away everything you wrote just to give sasuke the curse mark. 1 he never needed it, and 2. It's just so stupid and annoying for these characters YOU made to act this way when you've shown us that they aren't their cannon counterpart, yet you just throw that away. ive noticed you sacrifice the entire story just to follow some cannon events. It just makes me unlikely to read anymore when you consistently do this.

Wow. This story has turned into cringefest with this chapter...

Ugh. Naruto immediately wagging his tail in front of Sakura was the cringiest moment so far. Especially after the writer made Naruto completely ignore Hinata's existence when there were only 4 students in class.

i'm with sasuke on this

my family doesn't tan. we burn. part of the reason i stay indoors

Absolutely loved this but where is the next chapter tho

heyy i know its been two years but i hope you come back to this story its really good

why is there no more posts

Love the story it confused me at some points with about 40 chapters being a flash back but it's still good can't wait for the next

I still believe that you will come back to this fanfic. I shall continue waiting, watching for the moment that this story is updated as I have not yet lost faith in long hiatus fanfic creators. (It hurt my head writing that. Never was a fan of long sentences. I believe that you will return though)

I like the story so far but some things just don't mesh too well. a few things have bugged me a little so far, they're not story breaking or anything just slightly immersion breaking. like with killing with the rookies. if I'm correct only sasuke and naruto have killed but ones first kill is not easy. even trained adult soldiers struggle with it never mind 12 year Olds. Then there is fact naruto is so willing to kill it goes against his very character he never wants to kill unless necessary But hinata not knowing how to swim that's way crazy. she's a trained ninja that had to learn water walking and it's never come up she can't swim? But overall I really like this story so far so I hope you keep it going.

why are their so many flashbacks wtf

and just when this story was starting to really get going too. I hope you do decide to update it. I wanna find out what happens.

Is this story discontinued?

you used a quote from the movie, Atlantis: The Lost Empire, didn't you?

I’ll wait as long as I need to to get the next part of this story