Reviews for WKC I The Hammer and The Gale
Forever Free Evergreen chapter 3 . 7/14/2012
Character.
Asides that, it was good.
LittleKing9512 chapter 3 . 7/14/2012
XD

Good one Alastor.

Good chapter Greywing. 2 thumbs up! :)-nice guy smile
Forever Free Evergreen chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
I practically know what will be written in the next chapter if I'm reading this right.

A few spelling & grammar mistakes but other than that, it was good.
Luckenhaft chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
This is badass and awesome plus hilarious! :) you rule Greywing-chan! :)-sheet eating smile.
The Old Master Known as Curtis chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
its cool to know i'm not the only one starting the White Knight Chronicle fan fiction story from the beginning. I like your story man dude. good job.
Forever Free Evergreen chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Ryan & Zai remind me of two of Greed's henchmen from Fullmetal Alchemist, I think their names were...Ah I can't remember them right now.

The story itself is good. Looking forward to how you progress.
Luckenhaft chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
King: YES I AM! XD

really funny chapter! you did an awesome job keeping Ryan and me in character.

one more thing (Steals Zai's hammer and begins to attack the fourth wall) I love smashing the fourth wall! :)-HAPPY GO LUCKY SHEET EATING SMILE!

and I'm your first reviewer! yes! BOOYA! :)-EVEN MORE HAPPY GO LUCKY SHEET EATING SMILE!

Here is a cookie for doing a good job. (hands you a cookie.)