|Reviews for WKC I The Hammer and The Gale|
| Forever Free Evergreen chapter 3 . 7/14/2012
Asides that, it was good.
| LittleKing9512 chapter 3 . 7/14/2012
Good one Alastor.
Good chapter Greywing. 2 thumbs up! :)-nice guy smile
| Forever Free Evergreen chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
I practically know what will be written in the next chapter if I'm reading this right.
A few spelling & grammar mistakes but other than that, it was good.
| Luckenhaft chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
This is badass and awesome plus hilarious! :) you rule Greywing-chan! :)-sheet eating smile.
| The Old Master Known as Curtis chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
its cool to know i'm not the only one starting the White Knight Chronicle fan fiction story from the beginning. I like your story man dude. good job.
| Forever Free Evergreen chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Ryan & Zai remind me of two of Greed's henchmen from Fullmetal Alchemist, I think their names were...Ah I can't remember them right now.
The story itself is good. Looking forward to how you progress.
| Luckenhaft chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
King: YES I AM! XD
really funny chapter! you did an awesome job keeping Ryan and me in character.
one more thing (Steals Zai's hammer and begins to attack the fourth wall) I love smashing the fourth wall! :)-HAPPY GO LUCKY SHEET EATING SMILE!
and I'm your first reviewer! yes! BOOYA! :)-EVEN MORE HAPPY GO LUCKY SHEET EATING SMILE!
Here is a cookie for doing a good job. (hands you a cookie.)