|Reviews for Thirty Words|
| Senka chapter 12 . 12/17/2014
oh god I adoree head pats. once again, I'm smiling like an idiot, ack!
| Random Reader chapter 21 . 12/12/2014
You write both of them so well! Their adorable little moments just make my heart brust with love. God, the one when he was dreaming a little something-something with Ib... the one with Garry meeting her parents... ALL OF THEM. They are all so good and I like how you portray them realistically with their worries over their age difference. I don't believe I have ever read something so well done.
I'm usually a horrible person who doesn't review often...unless I truly enjoy what I read...you, my dear writer, have achieved a rare review.
Much love and luck to you and your writing.
| Random reader chapter 13 . 12/8/2014
I like your stories:) they're cute and sweet and mostly innocent. Please make more stories!on a side note I think hide and seek from the game is a nice soundtrack for the fluffy ones
| InsaneCupcake chapter 5 . 9/27/2014
Gwaaah! *A* *hyperventilates*
| Akuma Kawashima chapter 21 . 8/22/2014
Is it just me or does Garry's black strands remind you of seaweed? Initially that's what I thought. Anywho, your chapters are adorable! I hope you continue!
| Ai2000 chapter 21 . 7/20/2014
This story has made me happier than anything else I've read, ever!
| ToriANIMEFREEK chapter 21 . 7/14/2014
Lov it soooo much... But WERE DID YOU GOOOOOO!
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/6/2014
I know how Ib feels in this situation.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2014
Was he using the blanket to hid his probable erection, his arousal or both?
| GarryxIb Fangirl chapter 21 . 6/23/2014
ASDFGHJKL; Author-san you HAVE to update don't leave 200 readers hanging! I just cant help but ship Garry and Ib so much! I especially liked chapter two because, you know,... ;) Big Garry x Ib moments! Btw I'm just too lazy to log in mobile on my account (Shortcleanfreak01) so uh don't really freak out over the guest name I guess? I cant think of a better way to describe myself so xD
| xxXMythiaXxx chapter 21 . 6/13/2014
Well, after reading the entire story (or what's posted), I'm wondering about your presence! It's been more than a year since your last update, wow. I hope you're still interested in this fanfic, because I really like it. Thank fanfic writer DCreed for introducing me to this fandom.
Anyway, these bunches of one shots are amazing and really great. A pretty cool idea you have, using words for inspiration. I was about to do something like that, and was utterly surprised it already exists! Very nicely done, can't say orderly since there really isn't any chronological order, but the romance is just, wow! Love it, no joke.
Your grammar is nearly flawless, some words need capitalization though. Most of them are when someone starts to speak, you know, in dialogue. :)
As for the content: your ideas are fresh and entertaining. I have overall enjoyed them, but chapter two (or 3) very much disturbed me...until I found out it was a dream. To keep any newcomers from the feeling I felt, I prefer putting the dream scene into italics.
If you're clean out of ideas...I can try to help you the best I can! I mean, I...somehow...read your profile and you're older than me by whole high school years (if you get what I mean), but you know. It never really matters in the fanfiction world. XD
I am anxiously waiting for another fluffy awkward IbXGarry chapter. You really do like writing about macaroons, huh? (:
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/5/2014
I love these one shots, I really do! Keep it up!
| Annnabeee chapter 21 . 5/8/2014
Please please PLEASE continue! I absolutely LOVE these one-shots
| ForestFairy chapter 21 . 3/2/2014
All of these one-shots are just so amazing! Garry and Ib's interactions are so adorable and I just love the way you portrayed them! This made me so happy!
| wtfh chapter 14 . 1/20/2014
OMGG! The adorable-ness is killing me. It's such an innocent and simple love. Uniquely moving.