|Reviews for Nobody Has To Know|
| justnope chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
Damn... it is amazing how you managed to tell such an emotional piece in so few words. I have been using this website for a while (hm... maybe 2y) but have never felt such compulsion to leave a comment. Your story moved me that much.
| REDH chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Just...whoa...I loved it.
| AshTT chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This reminds me of the relationship between Alice and Rosalie in your other story but for sure this is a more angst and heartbreaking piece. Love how you portray the tensions in their relationships. Well done and can't wait to read more from you!
| Crazycatlady89 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I still have a knot in my throat. In spite of staring at these already written words for god knows how long. Such wicked beauty.
I am immediately your fan and admirer.
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
So bittersweet. I liked their mostly silent communication and then the powerful lies that they know won't change anything.
| hisgirlinterrupted chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Alice's "I don't love you"... ouch. Lies are hard.
| Lauraa93 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Are you doing a follow on to this? *please say yes* lol
| Morphy chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
wow i dont think anyones ever said so much in a story by saying so little.
i loved it, the complications and the heart ache make the story so real. i forgot how much i love your writing, hope to read more :)
| Golden Waffles chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
This was rather beautifully written, I think. I wasn't sure I would like it at first, but I really did. I felt for both of them.
| WistfulLove chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Well that wasn't depressing..
Good, but depressing.
I completely disagree with cheating, however seeing as this is only fiction and you write so well, I vote they have a relapse once Bella ties the knot. I mean, who could resist Alice? Come on.
| Asimo chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Dear Miss Beetlebum. *sigh*
It's so weird.. For every word I read.. I didn't want to read the next. But no.. It's not because your story sucks. Not at all.. For every word I got closer to the end.. And that isn't fun! When I read your words.. Your writing.. I get reminded of WHY you are my favorite author. The favorite.. And no it's not because you are who you are to me. But now I will stop being sentimental.. ;-)
I love your story! Your words speak to me and my heart breaks for them. I almost wish you would keep writing and that you would give them a happy ending!
| MyTwiDreams chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Beautifully written and definitely worth to be continued. Thanks for sharing this story
| AlohaKalani chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Absolutly beautiful ... 3
| A. S. Rainwater chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I don't think there are words enough in my vocabulary to describe how much I loved this. Not only seeing you back, but...
My chest is still tight from reading this, my heart is thudding a mile a minute... god, this was beautiful, and so bittersweet that I will carry that last line in my head for a while... "As well as everything else, we are both goddamn liars."
I can't tell you how well that sums this up... because there is no denying the love between these two...
Never wonder why I fell for you, ever again. And if you do, please refer back to this, and everything else you've written... because among other reasons, you are an amazing author, my Miracle.
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
C'mon! You know you want to! You're just teasing us!