|Reviews for Legend Of Korra: Not in Time|
| penknife321 chapter 32 . 2/28
I'M LOVIN THIS!
| KittyKati1 chapter 32 . 2/15
Omg! *o* that's just awesome! :D
Please! Please continue soon! *-*
Greetings, Jekaterina :)
| ZERO chapter 32 . 1/31
No chapter 33 yet?
| Toph of Dirk Pro chapter 32 . 1/7
Stop making cliffhangers and end it in like one LONG chapter
| Miss Crazy Fangirl chapter 32 . 1/6
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| WhiteAsukalover chapter 32 . 12/13/2013
A bit short, but still awesome.
| WarriorServent chapter 32 . 12/12/2013
Another great chapter, I really like your style of writting, and I cant wait to see what happens next! Also, what the heck is going on in the second last part where Zuko is fighting someone? One moment it says he is fighting Iroh, and the next Ozai.
| Malica15 chapter 25 . 12/7/2013
Well, look what we have here! Awesome chapter! :D
| pachysam chapter 31 . 12/5/2013
Good on Zuko to bellow at Ozai!
The Headband is up! WOW!
It would be awesome if On Ji joined the team!
Here are ideas:
Jinora is somehow there when Aang and On Ji meet.
Jinora: Army! Actually the Air-Nomads were pacifists and philopsophers.
Teacher: Are you calling me a liar!
Jinora: Actually the one who wrote the tales of the Air Nomads as warmongers was a liar!
Music-Teacher: Stop dancing!
Jinora; Dancing is good! Good to enjoy things! And good to get fit too.
Music-Teacher: Are you lecturing me!
Jinora: I'm only trying to solve things peacefully.
On Ji can turn out to've been descended from Sun Warriors and to know firebending! She can use many firebending techniques such as the Breath of Fire and the Fire-Wall as well as Blue Firebending and Fire-Scanning (the move the Fire-Sage used to check Korra before she met Avatar Wan)! She can also learn to fire lightning as well as to redirect it!
On Ji can turn out to respect and pity the Air-Nomads! She can also pity and respect the people of the North and South Poles as well as the Earth-Kingdom!
On Ji: This is a flying buffalo! So you're-
(she pokes Aang playfully)
On Ji: An airbender!
(she pulls the headband up)
On Ji; Yep! And you're the Avatar!
Aang; Okay! You got me!
On Ji: Good! I'm glad you're the Avatar. More than Mr Serious. You're a merry old soul and a merry old soul are you!
On Ji: I wish to help! The people of your worlds suffering! It's unbearable! Poor people suffering! And my people too! And the poor Air-monks all slaughtered! All because of Sozen and Azulon as well as Ozai! And Ozai is completely mad! If he is left be he'll destroy all creation!
On Ji: Fire-Prince Zuko!
On Ji: You're a descendant of Roku! WOW!
On Ji: So Korra's a future Avatar! She's the right type as your successor! She's as brave and kind as you are! And as jolly too!
Korra and Aang can act as partners of crime making the dance party! I can imagine the two planning it as well as bellowing out 'The Flameos' and 'Rock it'!
The students can spot how the hosts are from the other three but be pleased with them! They can be pleased at how the Avatar and the future Fire-Lord are good people!
Shoji: I wish to join too! I wish to end the madness too! And pals are there for eachother!
Shoji can show firebending! He would prove less talented than On Ji the prodigy at first! But teachings from Aang and Zuko as well as Korra can help him become better! He can learn firebending such as the Breath of Fire and the Fire-Wall! He can fail at the lightning at first but then get it at last! He can also learn lightning redirection!
The firebenders can learn the Dancing Dragon!
On Ji: The Dancing Dragon felt good! It felt as if I was part dragon!
Roku can reveal Zuko is his descendant during the tales of his past!
Roku can show the whole group his past!
Korra can laugh at the airbenders running from Roku and Gyatso's pranks!
Korra can cheer on Roku for getting the better of Sozen for how he treated the Earth-Kingdom!
On Ji can cry for poor Fang as would many others!
On Ji: I knew Sozen was a monster! But this! Leaving Roku to die to protect his own hide!
Bolin or Meelo: Eeek! Mutant fish with two heads!
Bolin: Creepy lady!
Korra: Hamma is dangerous! I can tell! Be careful! She might be a monster!
Jinora; Hamma did it!
Sokka: I knew it!
Korra; Me too!
On Ji: Me as well! I smelt something fishy!
Iroh 2: Shocking I presume when the monster you fight turns out to be from your own people!
Aang: Let our friend go Hamma!
Hamma: You brought firebenders! You betrayed your own people my student!
Jinora: You did it yourself! You let revenge consume you!
Hamma: Your people ruined us!
Zuko: Revenge will consume you as it did to Sozen!
Sokka: So Amon was one of our people!
Iroh 2: Yes! Ironic! The monster you fought was one of your own people!
Sokka: And a bloodbender too!
Mako: This is how he took the bending!
Zuko can get a dragon!
Sun Chief: Look!
On Ji: Eggs!
Sun Chief: Yes!
Sun Chief: Stored! Frozen! Presered for when the war is over! Then they'll come out and the dragon-race shall be reborn! Zuko has gotten the first of the new dragon-race! And a golden one! Fitting! It bodes well for you all and for the future you'll build!
The girls and Aang can coo over baby dragons! Zuko and Iroh 2 can smile and stroke baby dragons showing a soft spot for babies!
Mai can ride with Zuko on his dragon! She can show her adventurous side with it! She can also talk to it as Zuko would!
Zuko's dragon can be a dragon-version of Appa! Smarter than people think! Capable of being gentle as well as tough! Loyal to pals! Protective of them! He can often come to their rescue such as when he breathes fire upon Azula and the Rough Rhinos to protect Korra and when he breathes fire on Ozai to save Aang and Zuko! And he can be good buds with the animal members!
Some big snakes can attack Momo! But the dragon can protect Momo from them!
Korra can use martial arts on Combustion Man as well as bending!
The dragon can be the one who finishes off Combustion Man!
Colonel Mongke can be defeated by Iroh 1 or Iroh 2 with the Breath of Fire! Kachi can be defeated by Asami or Sokka with a double-bladed sword! Vachir can be beaten by Bolin or Toph! Mako can blow Vachir's bombs up easily and beat him up! Ogolodei can be beaten when Jinora uses airbending to tie him up with his own chain before using her Breath of Air to blow him over!
On Ji and Azula can use blue firebending to fight eachother!
Jeong Jeong can turn out to be able to breath fire and shoot lightning!
The Sun Chief can turn out to be able to breath fire and shoot lighting!
Korra can make a tornado and breath fire during her fight with Ozai!
Aang can breath fire on Ozai too!
Aang can learn the Breath of Fire and Blue Firebending as well as lightning!
The group can meet Avatar Wan who tells his tale and tells about energybending with help from a lion-turtle!
| WhiteAsukalover chapter 31 . 12/5/2013
And the intrigue builds again. Sweet..
| SherriexKaiser chapter 31 . 12/4/2013
omg i thing this story is amazing
| kimmytruly319 chapter 31 . 12/4/2013
Your writing style is amazing, and I am so jealous, but I did get a little confused about the story line here and there... Other than that, I love this crossover, it is amazing. Really awesome story, can wait to read some more of it!:) (I literally have been reading this for like six hours...)
| WhiteAsukalover chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Perfection in fanfic form. That's it.
| god of all chapter 30 . 12/3/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
| pachysam chapter 29 . 12/3/2013
The bit when Korra reacted to Aang's anger to Joo Dee was funny! As was Aang's anger with Korra for lying!
Korra fighting Azula! WOW!
The two Irohs together! Good one! And good on Iroh 2 helping Zuko as well as defying Ozai!
Good on Korra and Zuko doing a daring rescue!
The vision bit really got to me! I could picture Aang's reaction to Amon threatening the airbender-kids! I can also picture him bellowing 'Leave them alone' and 'Take me'!
Here are ideas:
Korra can sneak up on Aang during The Headband!
The grandchildren can somehow travel to the past!
Jinora can fit the Headband one being Miss Clever and Curious! I can picture her learning much and getting along with On Ji as well as getting on the teacher's nerves with her correction of the 'airbender-army' and correcting the music-teacher about dancing!
On Ji can somehow discover Aang is the Avatar and join them! She can turn out to know firebending especially the Breath of Fire and Fire Walls! She can learn lightning and lightning-redirection!
Shoji can discover Aang is the Avatar too and join them! He too can be a firebender!
The group can meet the Sun Warriors and the dragons! Zuko can get his own dragon! There can be more dragon eggs stored within a cave-freezer to store them for after the war to hatch during peacetime!
Aang and Korra as well as the grandkids and On Ji can pet and coo over a baby dragon!
When they meet Hamma Jinora and Korra can be suspicious of her especially her lies!
Hamma: You betrayed your own people!
Jinora: You did it yourself!
Hamma: She betrayed us to the monsters!
Iroh; Your anger and lust for revenge already did it!
Iroh 2 can breath fire!
Aang can breath fire on Amon to knock the mask off!
Avatar Wan can make appearances based on the flashback which reveals how he became the first Avatar!
Korra can help Aang to fight Ozai!