What a wild turn of events! It's truly a pity that neither Needle the Bard nor the Brothers Grimm are here to chronicle any of these exploits. Think of what a set of childrens' tales these exploits would make!

Although a solid seven yeats has passed since you first wrote this marvelous tale, it's lost none of it's draw whatsoever! JK hetself could not havel!
JK herself couldn't have written this any better.

And the Avalanche of True CHANGE begins anew. What a thoroughly marvelous story!

Cliffhangerrr!

Harry and Riddle actually comvetsing prior to open warfare; wotta concept! Add a little lunch and cuppa and bob's yer umcle! Poof, they're getting to ,

This one chapter could stand as a true one-shot; absolutely complete, and all by itself. This was the life of Potter from the viewpoint of Albus as far as fourth year. And really brilliantly done. And now to follow up with chapter 2!

Dig, dug. Drag, Dragged. Not DRUG! Only illiterate morons use drug as the past tense of drag. Your writing doesn't come across as that of an illiterate moron. So why am I seeing the word "drug" in your story?

I have finished the fic with weird feelings. What a strange story. Not conventional at all.

This is one of those stories that only make sense if you read them while high as a kite.
Otherwise you'll end up with a massive migraine or a severely swollen face from repeated facepalming.
Or you could try mushrooms, or acid...

This was total bullshit

this was... different but genuinely engaging. easily one of the best ones i have read. thank you

Wonderfully unique story. Really good world building and it kept me hooked till the end. I enjoyed the unexpected arrival of a massive complication with the sentient magic...it's almost like how a video game character would feel if the joypad were in the hands of a child.

I also felt, for quite a while, that there is a definite sad/melancholy feel to the entire story, yet I cannot pinpoint what gives me this feel. If you are still reading reviews and replying to them, I would like your thoughts on how you conveyed this so well without outright saying "This is sad, now go and feel sad". I would love to incorporate this skill in my stories so I can change the mood of my writing, maybe even in stark contrast to the events happening...like the events are happy but the subconscious feel is that things are about to go very wrong.

this was absolutely great and gave me a lot of new ideas

This was massively fucked up.

I'm not sure what it was about this one, but I spent a large chunk of, if not most of, this story feeling unsettled. Definitely a page-turner, though.