Bella chose well this time

Well written. A sad one-shot but it was an interesting, plausible possibility..

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From start to finish, this was perfection. Thank you for sharing it!

I enjoyed this a great deal. Love seeing Bella grow up rationally.

My favorite part, though, was when she went over the "keeping the puppy happy" routine. That. Was. Great. Thank you. :)

Good character development!

Great one shot.

I just read this I was searching through your other P&P stories. And it was one of the best twilight fanfics I've ever read and I don't even like twilight all that much. You're amazing, Never stop writingB-)

I was never a Jacob lover but I still had to admit that your story of them was beautiful and really put Edward into his place.

Why couldn't the real one have ended like this? Very well written and nice twist :)

Wow. Didn't think I could like a story like this but I totally did.

Having just read your Pride and Prejudice story I was a little surprised to realize that your only other story was Twilight. but I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I like that you had Bella grow up and realize the problems of her relationship with Edward while still being Bella. And Jake really is the much nicer guy, so kudos to accomplishing so much in such a short space.

I love this story! It always bugged me what the future for Bella and Jacob would have been if Alice had not seen Bella jump off the cliff and Edward never returned. It always makes me sad to think that Bella would never really be 100% happy with Jacob and Jacob would not be able to imprint on Nessie. So, thank you for this story!

Second time I've read this. Seriously, it makes me cry every time. You write so well. And I'm kind of glad it's not a huge novel rewrite. It wrapped up everything so perfectly, all the way back to why Edward didn't come back. It gives your audience a lot of closure for the Jacob fans. Great, great job.

Loved it... wish it went that way :)