Reviews for Pale Blossoms
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 15 . 11/19/2014
Beautiful and tragic story. Solitary Confinement never helps anyone. Annar needs care and psychological counseling and therapy or just permanent death. Love all sweet people in Asguard but sad Annar reminds me of Odin's cruel punishment in TDW. Death is kinder than solitary confinement and abandonment.
musme chapter 15 . 4/13/2014
I like it
CrowX chapter 14 . 2/6/2014
Oh, this is so magical. I love this story, it is in a way very AU, but also in a way very much like Thor/Asgard canon. So very lovely. I like how the Frost Giants are the reverred gods in your story. So beautiful!
CrowX chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
I absolutely adore this story. It is so beautiful and tender. Loki is a bit OOC, but that's not a negative comment. I like him that way too, being gentle and frail, while being strong on the inside like in chapter 1.
Just one small critic: the word ravenette doesn't exist. Also blacknette, as I've read in other Thorki stories. There is only the word brunette for brown-haired people and blonde. Everybody else is either a redhead or a black-haired person.
WhySoSerious94 chapter 15 . 12/11/2013
Hiya i know i am late (like a year or so sorrys) but i could not help reviewing! Loved the story so much i laughed i cried and did other girly things. I love how you made loki's character all innocent and just soo cute. Anywhos i just wanted to let you know that i really did enjoy this story
Arekkusu Naitofaia chapter 15 . 11/25/2013
Whoa this story was so beautiful! I loved it! (I really had a silly soft spot for sexually innocent Loki) I love the plot, the mystery and suspense! How you explained Thor and Loki's love! So perfect! It was generally a heart-warming story. I really really loved it! Yay!
(though please for the love of gods let there be no mpreg in the sequel . not sure if you've written it already or something but damn im not reading mpreg)
crazypiggy181 chapter 9 . 11/21/2013
Beautiful story!
After a tiringly bad bad day, i'm in my very bad mood. But your story lit it up.
I've taken up reading fanfic since just last week, and your story is one of the best i've read! I regret not having reading fanfic before, now that i'm 17. Such a waste of time indeed, since i'm so in love with stories when i have to focus on my study preparing for my college examination. But they contain so so much fun/happiness that i can't resist!
I'm in the middle of the chapter right now, knowing it will come to a very hot scene ", not daring to read T.T!
Well, however, i'm just not comfortable with the feeling that others watched them make love... Oh men! It's just so embarrassing!

(I'm Vietnamese, so plz excuse any grammatical errors. And i'll be grateful if you would show me my mistakes.)
Annuin chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
A very interesting twist in the story. Annar is much more like the movie-Loki. I do like your Loki, and for once our Loki gets the happy life he deserves. But now I feel so sad for Annar ( Loki)! I have to check out your other stories now, hoping very much for a sequel...
Caro-Kitty chapter 15 . 8/6/2013
This was such a beautiful story 3 The end made me so happy :3 The epilogue though? THE SUSPENSE!

Of to stalk your page to find the sequel
Caro-Kitty chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
And the plot thickens! I'm loving this story so far. Thor is so sweet and gentle. It makes my fluff feels go through the roof! And its interesting to picture Loki as innocent and knowledgeable of the outside world (for the most part).

Off to read more
Evi15 chapter 15 . 4/24/2013
I loved this story and I believe it is the S's that increase XD
DeliriousDuck17 chapter 15 . 2/22/2013
Truly, amazing story! Very good job. I loved every moment of it especially the way you portrayed loki and thors love. Thank you for this awesomeness!
:3
Millie the Kitty chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
OMG! I LOVE Sabriel! It is soooo good! I now understand some of the stuff you wrote, and why you wrote it like that. Loki is actually a lot like Touchstone, don't you think? Great job on this thing!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/21/2012
Whoever u are ma'am, I love u, and I love ur stories and omg. I've read this entire story over the course of 2 days and just thought I should let u know even though you're probably not even gonna read this review knowing that you've already started a sequel... Anywhoooo, my consience wouldn't let me be at ease until I posted a review so here I am... akwardly talking to myself and all, but now i can go on peacefully and enjoy the rest of my thanksgiving break! Right after I read the first chapter to ur sequel that is... kbye C:
lil joker 1989 chapter 15 . 11/16/2012
Oh this was a nice story and I've got to say I can't wait to read the sequel :)
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