Reviews for Pokemon United
KrimsonShadow chapter 2 . 8/10
it's shadow ball, not dark ball.
blazaboi chapter 2 . 6/22
As soon as he said I'm a human I lost all intrest this seems to be a recurring trend with pokemon self inserts
Glace2 chapter 25 . 6/17
blazaboi chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
prophecy is just a diffrent way of saying plot armour :D
drexlroosh13 chapter 18 . 5/9/2015
This is amazing, you should keep going with this.
NYSTLSportsFan chapter 17 . 1/3/2015
Now, I read this story a long time ago, before I had an account even. But it's just as good as I remember it! I'm happy to see that it's still updating, too. You've done a great job so far in crafting a unique, interesting, and entertaining storyline, with great characters and pacing. Really, the only thing wrong with it is the occasional typo, which is not a problem at all. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!


Tsaukpaetra chapter 16 . 11/3/2014
Huh, not as much plot this time. But at least he's starting to hold up his own a lot better.
Keep going! ;)
What Lies Beyond chapter 13 . 5/4/2014
Team Galactic, The Keepers...Cipher? (Bloodthirsty, vicious, & unusually strong Pokemon...sounds like Shadow Pokemon to me)
JChittester chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
when will the next chapter be posted on fanfiction? I would like to know what will happen to Hunter.
John chapter 12 . 3/14/2014
This series is getting good. When will the next chapter be out?
ernestgoestocamp chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Nice, a great start to the story. I'll be sure to keep in touch. Keep up the good work.
Kitt chapter 11 . 12/5/2013
One other thing...Mary and Lucy are possibly transformed humans or shifters, correct? Something about them seemed a little off.
Kitt chapter 11 . 12/5/2013
interesting... notice Margaret basically admitted to also being a Legendary, but no one caught on?
Hunter's gonna somehow end up back home, right? Then have to figure out how to get back? You outta keep him an Umbreon when that'd be interesting to see how he'd deal with his world then.
NeverTheLess chapter 7 . 10/20/2013
I like the story so far, But I think it needs a little more creativity in the conversations I don't know it might be me. I hope you continue with the story.
SomeNerdWithABadUsername chapter 11 . 9/23/2013
Sudden character devolopement? (not about Cyrus, Margret mentioned it earlier) I love this fic, and I have a feeling that Mary will see Hunter in the next chapter. I think i know how Cyrus got his pokemon to be so over powered.
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