|Reviews for Melody's Soul|
| TheGoldenYoshichu chapter 1 . 3/28
Pretty nice story. Could do with some spacing in between lines. (Such as when one of the characters speaks.) There were also a couple of typos but nothing too terrible. I also thought that the relationship between Luigi and Melody is pretty cute. Overall the story was nice even with a few minor errors.
| The Cosmic Penguin chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Aw, sweet. I like this pairing too. :)
| eternal nothingness chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
good for melody I always felt sad having to suck her up into the vacuum
| Brittany Bauer chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
CUTE! I liked this story. It was CUTE!
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Some long story. -_-
| Carnivalia's Ringmaster chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Longest story was 810 words? Odd..anyway, it could be better, but it could've been WAY WORSE! Not too bad...just too short...