Reviews for The Return Of The Mermaids
Guest chapter 12 . 3/29
I love it. I need to see what happened to Emma and Ash.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/19/2013
Please don't stop righting I love you story you are an awesome righter so please please don't stop
Guest chapter 13 . 9/8/2013
continue it
elysa-isabella-lu chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
hi! i like ur stories and i hope u update soooon! ps, is this story going to be emma/will or bella/will?

pepper203 chapter 14 . 6/22/2013
OK hope its soon :-)
Guest chapter 13 . 4/24/2013
I liked it a lot, you write really well and it'd be a shame to not continue! :D Ignore them haters.
Sara chapter 13 . 3/26/2013
Well I for one love your story and it is soooooooooooooooooooo sad you had to stop because some people can't keep there bad thoughts to themselvesplz keep going
Person chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
Your Stories ARE AMAZING! Don't ever pay attention to what the haters say! Keep writing this story please! IM BEGGIN U
hanna chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
Plz update it I really like it who cares what anyone else says
Millie chapter 12 . 3/16/2013
Gollee. I actually liked this was good, though I have to admit there were some slight flaws. But I think you should rewrite it :)
Beachlover470 chapter 9 . 3/14/2013
Wow, drama! Like the story.
Hi chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
Love it I would get rid of charolett and let Bella have her necklace and make Emma a crystal necklace and have Bella and ash get together to make Emma and will jelouse
Qwerty chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
Great story so far u should make a whole book and then get it published
Anonomos chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
Sorry I can't spell but I love this story so write more
A person chapter 13 . 3/14/2013
U must write more i am hooked plz I just discovered this story last night and finders it today plz for me
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