Reviews for The Younger Brother
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
When will you finish the story
kody chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
haters gon hate :P good story tho.

ps: is that an allusion I c? "stay golden" haha
Guest chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
I Idon't know what kind of messages you had but i really like your story so if you would have time please update
Thx
Guest chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
Love this story very good
Evan chapter 6 . 6/2/2013
Holy shit... I feel the same way.
Jaylen Mitchell chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
What your saying right now, and I salute to you! And I LOOOOOOVVVVVVE this story! Keep up the good work and God bless! ;)
tyler b chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Love the story but when you plan on adding new chapter
lola chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
eeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww you so nasty boys should like girls and girls should like boy i am tots agstst people who are like in ur story
cococonnor07 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Omg I love this story:) josh kinda reminds me of me in a way...
cakid chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
I love this story. It's cute and sexy. chapter 3's a favorite. ;)
any more chapters? plz...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I APPROVE
Somebodyelse chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
More!
jonfck chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
A great chapter, this story is getting a bit more interesting then I expected it to, Austin is a lot of troubles I think. I cannot wait to see, how he gets out of this situation, without being looked upon as a total jerk by everyone but Melody and probably Josh or if he just accept that fate.
jonfck chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
Your endings, in this story are annoying and yet at the same they make me laugh, because you always end it right that moment then something really exciting is about to happen. And well I have to say no matter, how annoying your endings are they are also good for that same reason. This chapter was great I especially liked Josh's own thoughts about himself, that part was probably my favorite in this chapter.
jonfck chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
That was one hell of a scene I am kinda glad it was all imaginary though, at first I thought Austin was way too rough, considering Josh is so much younger it was his first time too, and also they haven't been together for that long. I am really glad you manage to get a boy on boy sex scene in this fanfic so early though it was nice. And what Austin did after was sweet and much more reasonable thing to happen, then the things in Josh's mind. I like how you made both Melody and Chase in the other chapter. The way they show their obsession is realistic. You really manage to show, how boys and girls manage their obsession differently. Chase grasping Josh's butt (a girl wouldn't do such a straight forward act) while Melody just talk, talk and talk even more.

Great job on the story
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