Reviews for A Goa'uld's Life
abandoned chapter 1 . 3/12
y would people even try ur stories?

u create two...u abandon one and rewrite the other...then immediately abandon it. now u only have one story active...and ur going to abandon it..

its nice that u tell people u abandoned them...but...u havent even been on the site a full 3 years...

whatever, u might want to try and complete a story before posting it...might end up better for you.
BlueScreen26 chapter 4 . 1/19
That's pretty risky to give them immortality. I wouldn't want my servants to be too powerful and that's exactly what they are.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2014
Retarded story. The protagonist doesn't remotely resemble Harry Potter, just a lazy as fuck excuse not to build a backstory. The author seems intent on dragging down other races to Harry's own levels of stupidity so he can win through magical Mary Sue powers, its just fucking pathetic all round.
Alex2909 chapter 20 . 12/2/2014
like how hadrians personality is. wonder how the situation with the ori will go
koper chapter 20 . 11/4/2014
Shame that you left it discontinued, it's realy good story and you're good writer
koper chapter 19 . 11/4/2014
Sooo, what about egeria? Hope she will join empire
salamangkero chapter 20 . 11/4/2014
pity this story seems to be abandoned. it ws quite interesting.
tylermech66 chapter 20 . 9/21/2014
well, at least get that ending done with soon, preferably within the next few months...
tylermech66 chapter 16 . 9/21/2014
I think "the perfect woman" or something like that uses lemuria for the name too.
Save Egeria :)
tylermech66 chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
in middle.
Also, I guess the next chapter will be on earth or at least soon?
tylermech66 chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
Overpopulation issues...
tylermech66 chapter 3 . 9/20/2014
Spars with Dumbledore, gets hit in a time turner that I don't exactly remember being there, and in about a day declares himself a god...
BinarySobriquet chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
A 3000 year timeskip and THIS is all that he's accomplished?! He has a population of fanatically loyal immortals! Even without giving them any goa'uld knowledge, he's still got 150 generations worth of eternally young geniuses! Over the course of the last three millennia, all the immortal Isaac Newtons, Albert Einsteins and Nikola Teslas haven't been able to come up with ANYTHING?! No Dyson spheres? No teleportation beams? No do-anything nano-machines?

He should have an empire rivaling the Ancients, yet all he has are the plasma cannons he stole 3000 years ago? Sorry, but this egregious lack of technological development has completely shattered my willing suspension of disbelief.
Annoy mouse chapter 20 . 7/17/2014
Sucks to hear you lost interest. Thanks anyway!
Philosophize chapter 20 . 7/15/2014
I look forward to reading the ending...
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