|Reviews for Puella Magi Charlotte Magica|
| nanananana chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
I hate sad stories but I couldn't stop reading even when I knew Charlotte's fate. Thanks for writing this, it was awesome.
| Uniko-Starre chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Anon: nah dude she dead
| About charlotte chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
so charlotte never died yes or no?
| NightSkyWolves chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
I read this before I was a complete know-it-all to the Madoka Magica series. I just had a thought, Mimi and Kiki could be Elly and Gertrud. XD They probably are.
| NightSkyWolves chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
-claps- Bravo! Perfection! This story is wonderful! Details are amazing, storyline stays in order, I can picture Charlotte's past perfectly! Perfection layered with cheese! And all that cheese is for Charlotte! XD Random me. Anyways, fascinating, one of the best Charlotte stories I have seen. You're a lovely storywriter, wish I could do as good.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
This is a very nice story, but there's one thing bothering me. Magical girls get a new name when they become a witch, (i.e. Sayaka became Oktavia von Sekendorff.) so Charlotte would have a different name as a magical girl.
| G66XD66 chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Woooow, this was awesome! i could totally see this as a couple extra chapters of the manga or an episode of the anime :3 It's just perfect and fits the style of Puella Magi so well! Good work
| YukiTenVianey Team chapter 4 . 7/17/2012
Ten: Why she... If I could only... if Charlotte hadn't... aaaghhh! Why did this had to happen? *covers face while weeping*
Glacia: *grief striken* It shouldn't have ended like this... her mothers life.
Vianey: *sobbing uncontrolably* Why did her mo-mother have to d-die? And then... *sniffle* and Charlotte then... WHY?
Glacia: That is just what happens. You have to loose everything you cared for in order to become a witch.
Ten: Is this the end, then? The end of the story?
Vianey: I guess so since... since Charlotte only... aaaaahhhhh!
If so, thank you so much for writting this story. The end couldn't have been any better, despite all the sadness it contained.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Typically speaking, witches do NOT have the same name as their magical girl counterpart
| Meitantei-chan chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
PLEASE UPLOAD NEXT CHAPTER! i love this but its so sad! poor Kiki, i can't believe she's dead!
| Meitantei-chan chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
wow this is good, but i feel sorry for Charlotte .. if only she knew! the truth behind being a Mahou Shojou, but i guess she would of died anyway.. its soo sad either way!
| Copper Hikari chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
You continue in a streak of excellence. I felt that the girls realized that Kiki was a witch a little too quickly, but you addressed the revelation immediately with Charlotte and Kyubey in the final paragraphs. You are handling this story with a metric ton of skill, and I'm honestly glad I took the time to read it.
Looking forward to more.
| Copper Hikari chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This was more than a first chapter; this was a brilliant short story in its own right. You distilled the Puella Magi Anime down to what makes it powerful: the moments. Each part of this was a moment, from Charlotte making her contract to her becoming a Magical Girl to her realizing that she can't necessarily save everybody. It all flowed brilliantly, carried the spirit of the Anime without flaw, and was overall exquisite. As I read the ending, I found myself hearing 'Connect' as the ending theme; it was just that good.
The only thing I can say is that Charlotte ends her fight by using decidedly 'English words'. Perhaps it's because the only character here is a girl with a westernized name, but I didn't think the dialogue was meant to be in Japanese until I read otherwise.
But hey, that's such a minor gripe that it's almost criminal. This was wonderful.
| YukiTenVianey Team chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Cying at the begining.
Drama and a fighting scene in the middle.
The NEED to destroy that horrible magical girl.
More crying and drama and then a bigger NEED to kill Kyuubei...
In other words, the best damn chapter EVER!
You are officialy our hero!