|Reviews for Equals|
| AvidAuthor chapter 1 . 5/26
So sad and broken and beautiful. Those are the words I would use to describe Amon and Korra, and those are the words I would use to describe this story. Good job.
| Shadow Flame 777 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
This is beautiful
| myfaceisawesme chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
THIS IS FLIPPING AWESOME! plz plz plz plz plz plz PLZ write more! :D
| sakR9 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Absolutely lovely. Beautiful.
At the start you made me think she was running away, yummy food! And then she was in his apartment, they were obviously already lovers...
And then I knew the time frame, and some of what had happened...
This just came together so so well and I enjoyed it, loved it.
Just, why why why do most people write Amon with the scars? I want Noatak's normal face:(
| The Beast in Repose chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
D': SO GOOD!
| JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Wow. This is … kind of amazing. I've only just started to like "Amorra" a little bit, but the way you write it here is really appealing. This reminded me a little bit of "Beauty and the Beast". Also, the idea of Korra coming to Amon for advice is interesting, but kind of makes sense because he was a leader, just as she is supposed to be. I like this very much.
| Enlyien chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
just... just leave me...
just leave me to wallow in my feels...
| Wendy A.S. Cole chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Beautifully done! I always find it amazing when a writer can convey so much with only a little dialogue. Great work!
| Jess chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I salute to you, pink-affinity. You have made the improbable possible.
| I Believe In Fairytales 606 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This was amazing! There was enough background to keep it from becoming confusing and the ending was perfect!
I declare that this story is worth two thumbs-up!