Reviews for Birthday Surprise
JamesTKent chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Very cool! I love the idea of the fabric.
Sarai chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Good story!
Saissa chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Great story Thomas, I have enjoyed it very much.

But I still much prefer your BATB stories.
yenyen76 chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Loved it!
StarlitStar chapter 17 . 11/20/2012
Loved it
JamesTKent chapter 15 . 10/17/2012
I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Your conversation is a little stiff and formal - try to loosen up a bit. Superboy and Superman both used the terms "courage and intelligence." That seems a bit stilted to me. I love the way the characters are developing, but I think you're overstating Paul's thinking about the Superboy/Kristen connection. Sure, he'd notice it, and you're probably using it for foreshadowing of him figuring out Superboy/Jonathon, but I think you're being a bit heavy-handed.

I -do- like the way you brought Christopher and his discovery into the story - that was nicely done, as was Sharron's discomfiture at all these "important people" in her house.

Please keep going! And soon! grin
teazer chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
Getting exciting. Now the questions I have are when are the Parents going to find out and what reactions are they going to have. Then his are the reactions of the Kent family. So Good so good
yenyen76 chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
This is good.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
I hope Clark behaves himself, and Is Lois going to follow Clark and see whats happening - silly girl...
MasaJeevas chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
I LOVE this story! I also love Superboy...I've been trying to find a good Superboy're fantastic!
StarlitStar chapter 15 . 10/13/2012
Great Chapter
teazer chapter 14 . 10/6/2012
Hmm, a trap for superman maybe? Then bill and superboy would have to go save him?
Saissa chapter 14 . 10/6/2012
I really like this story.

Cant wait to see if Kristen and Jonathan and Superboy all get together...

More please.
yenyen76 chapter 14 . 10/6/2012
This is good. Can't wait for more.
StarlitStar chapter 14 . 10/5/2012
Great chapter
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