|Reviews for Venus Vs Mars|
| TrippyToastersAndABagOfChips chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
You know, I really liked this. There aren't enough family-oriented stories for Golden Sun. It's nice to read something other than shipping/adventure stories once in a while.
I particularly enjoyed how you used sparring matches to develop the relationship between Felix and Jenna. I never would have thought of siblings reconnecting through something like that, but you made it work. And I wouldn't worry about how you added the first section last. It flows really well.
Like I said, I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!
| JamesK716 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
You know battle-wise i don't thnink Jenna could beat Felix in a physical fight. But to be fair, i'm not sure Garet/Piers/Isaac could beat Felix. Your combat was well written, not the best that i've read, but good. In the early battles you did a good job of showing how much of a master Felix was. Noting her flaws adequantly.
Keep it Up!