PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!

Please update

Its 9-29-13 you have not updated ina long time why?

This is a wonderful story!
I love how in character everyone is.
no spelling or grammar errors that I can recognize.

I love this story. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow love the story and the chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

true so true

Very good chapter, defiantly can relate to Big Mac, excellently done.

YaY! Another chapter! This is the best Twilight Sparkle and Big Mac fanfic I have ever read. It's so cute how he is so scared at the prospect of letting Twilight down. Just adorable.

Awesome bro this chapter was flawless and you got Luna down and the advice was brilliant on your part . Excellent job on this chapter i enjoyed it bravo.

It actually worked well. Lunas dialogue, I mean. It seemed to switch back and forth from the Royal Canterlot Voice to normal speech, which reflects the fact that she is still adapting to the new world she lives in now. Excellent work

I'm actually glad this wasn't so long. I can actually get some sleep tonight! _

i love it, the suspense the humor and friendship in this.

keep going this story is a keeper

And now she has the perfect excuse to just stare at him the next day, sweaty and panting and muscles working. XD Update soon!

OOOOO... More please! This is really quite good. :D

This is great! I love how all the characters are themselves, even Celestia when she is making a joke, or Big Mac's worries about public speaking. Please continue.