Reviews for The Maelstrom and Deathberry - The 1st Act
Thedark10 chapter 42 . 9/9
I loved the story, amazing plot too also as much as I love pairing stories I respect your chose to not put any pairing in the story as the story is awesome just the way it is.
I also hope you do the 2nd act because like I said I loved the 1st act.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 4/24
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
Redrover1760 chapter 41 . 5/21/2017
And It Ends.
Please come out with Act 2. This was awesome.
frieza1738 chapter 1 . 4/14/2017
Also, don't listen to the haters, man.
Just do what you do best and keep up the good work.
frieza1738 chapter 42 . 4/14/2017
I loved the story, it was amazing. So when is the 2nd Act coming out?
Guest chapter 42 . 1/3/2017
Please write act 2 soon
animecutylover chapter 6 . 12/22/2016
Omg! Awesome Zanpakuto!~ XD
animecutylover chapter 5 . 12/19/2016
Huh? How?
animecutylover chapter 4 . 12/19/2016
Omg! Ichigo's dream is like a anime fan dreaming about the Naruto world! XD
animecutylover chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
I wonder what Naruto's Zanpakutō would look like.

Didn't Ichigo realize that Naruto's the same age as him? Why did he call Naruto a kid?
animecutylover chapter 2 . 12/17/2016
The heck? Aizen sure moves fast. How did he even know what Naruto would look like?
animecutylover chapter 1 . 12/16/2016

The summary has made me so excited to read this story! This prologue is not helping keep my excitement down either!

Six Foot Assassin chapter 8 . 8/31/2016
The amount of nonsense written within these chapters is high.
Six Foot Assassin chapter 3 . 8/31/2016
Started reading and there are already a few things that don't make sense.
Dragunav chapter 3 . 4/4/2016

"why should i follow you?"
"we just saved your life"

that is actually a really bad choice from your part. He's in an unknown place, has no idea who either of these groups are and both of them wants him to come along.

and he's not even suspicious about the second group who might aswell be trying to capture him for the same reasons as the first.

this is stupid.
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