Reviews for The Maelstrom and Deathberry - The 1st Act
Redrover1760 chapter 41 . 5/21
And It Ends.
Please come out with Act 2. This was awesome.
frieza1738 chapter 1 . 4/14
Also, don't listen to the haters, man.
Just do what you do best and keep up the good work.
frieza1738 chapter 42 . 4/14
I loved the story, it was amazing. So when is the 2nd Act coming out?
Guest chapter 42 . 1/3
Please write act 2 soon
animecutylover chapter 6 . 12/22/2016
Omg! Awesome Zanpakuto!~ XD
animecutylover chapter 5 . 12/19/2016
Huh? How?
animecutylover chapter 4 . 12/19/2016
Omg! Ichigo's dream is like a anime fan dreaming about the Naruto world! XD
animecutylover chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
I wonder what Naruto's Zanpakutō would look like.

Didn't Ichigo realize that Naruto's the same age as him? Why did he call Naruto a kid?
animecutylover chapter 2 . 12/17/2016
The heck? Aizen sure moves fast. How did he even know what Naruto would look like?
animecutylover chapter 1 . 12/16/2016

The summary has made me so excited to read this story! This prologue is not helping keep my excitement down either!

Six Foot Assassin chapter 8 . 8/31/2016
The amount of nonsense written within these chapters is high.
Six Foot Assassin chapter 3 . 8/31/2016
Started reading and there are already a few things that don't make sense.
Dragunav chapter 3 . 4/4/2016

"why should i follow you?"
"we just saved your life"

that is actually a really bad choice from your part. He's in an unknown place, has no idea who either of these groups are and both of them wants him to come along.

and he's not even suspicious about the second group who might aswell be trying to capture him for the same reasons as the first.

this is stupid.
Guest chapter 33 . 2/11/2016
Instead of using expletive for swear words it would be better to just use asterix or leave them out completely because i found that expletive was quite annoying
King of the Gods2015 chapter 2 . 1/23/2016
your story is a boring piece of dirt
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