|Reviews for Fallen Angel|
| Cstan chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This was a very emotional piece of fiction. I enjoyed every second of reading it.
I didn't spot any spelling or grammar mistakes but that could be because I was captivated by your story.
A shame that the protagonist doesn't know the names of the twin goddesses, otherwise he might make the connection
Again, a very nice fic and I hope you keep this kind of level in all your work.