Reviews for Fallen Angel
Cstan chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This was a very emotional piece of fiction. I enjoyed every second of reading it.

I didn't spot any spelling or grammar mistakes but that could be because I was captivated by your story.

A shame that the protagonist doesn't know the names of the twin goddesses, otherwise he might make the connection

Again, a very nice fic and I hope you keep this kind of level in all your work.

See you.