|Reviews for The Medieval Times|
| Jyoti chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
| Jyoti chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
Nice update. A few spelling errors but nothing that can't be edited :)
| Jyoti chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Well this is a pretty cool story. I've never played the sims medieval, though I've heard of it, so it didn't really catch my eye at first. But I like it and I'd like to see where it goes.
| ConKipcha chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Just finished reading all three chapters, so that means it's time to review! :)
It's interesting that you've chosen to start Prosperitia out so far along the development path; while it sets up each of the Hero characters as masters in their respective fields, it'll make coming up with things to advance the plot more of a challenge.
I'd have to say that my favourite character so far is Tristan. There's something hilariously endearing about a Commander who sits down at a table, chugs back a cup of water, runs away, and then later says to his friend, "I have SO much to tell you about." And I quite like the description of "gobbling water."
On a constructive note, you should pay a little more attention to spelling. At one point Margaret is described as "being king" instead of being kind. There were other instances like that, but that's the one that comes to mind.
Finally, you don't have to apologize for Caleb's speech! If the story was nothing but romance, it wouldn't be nearly as interesting. I fully support "a little war action" in future!
| nightfuries chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Well, I love all manner of Sims Medieval stories, but I cannot wait to see where this goes! I love the idea of the girl and guy gang, and the annexing to Effenmont'll definitely be neat! Hope you write more soon!